like most of this author, great story with great potential. but grammar and spelling is really bad. and the update stability started good, but crumbled recently.
Hi everyone
Welcome to my novel♥️
I love it! It is very well-written and descriptive, and it helps the reader imagine the scenes almost perfectly. Each chapter has a unique plot and titles.And what I love the most, is the suspense a reader will feel, as she read through the words.
I just recently bumped and read this story and I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five star! If you are looking for a story with surprising vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now.
I like this story hope that the author won't just drop it like the others. The more I read it, the more I want to finish it. Hope the author constantly update its chapter. ❤️
I like the premise for this book. Heroic MC gets transmigrated into another race, with game like elements. Right up my alley.
For me, the issue is word choice. It seems it was written in another language and translated, or the author is having a joke with us readers.
The negatives do not erase the positives. With the help of a good editor this will be great. Very imaginative.
i hope this will get pucked........ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
this kinda looks good, probably there will be humor while having hide and seek kinda remind me of Manhua "My wife is the empress". I have high hopes for this story rooting for it to be chosen!
I dont usually give reviews but this book is dope it is interactive and its not your usual book to de honest wasn't expecting the healer route but 10/10 my guy good book
The story change when he started school. Where is the rune master all those magic turned into a beast master story. Even his system change . I even read the same story like this .
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I KNOW THAT MANY ARE THINKING THAT THIS NOVEL IS VERY SLOWPACED
AND EVEN I THINK THAT(BUT FROM THE LATEST CHAPTERS I AM DOUBTING THAT IT ISN'T SO CAUSE IN JUST TWO MONTHS AFTER RELEASING THE GAME PEOPLE HAVE REACHED LIKE TRUE EMPEROR REALM AND THERE MIGHT BE SOME PEOPLE ABOVE THAT, THAT HAVE YET TO SHOW UP).
SECONDLY, ARE TALENTED PEOPLE THAT COMMON OR ARE TALENTS THAT EASY TO ACQUIRE ?
I MEAN HEAVEN GRADE BODIES, IMMORTAL GRADE BODIES, GOD GRADE TALENTS ETC. THE NOVEL HAS DEPICTED MANY PEOPLE WITH SUCH TALENTS AND SOME HAVE EVEN DIED (ISN'T IT A BIT TOO FAST)
THIRD, IS CULTIVATION THAT EASY?
THERE ARE MANY CULTIVATION NOVEL OUT THERE AND ALL OF THEM TELL ONE THING FOR CERTAIN
THAT CULTIVATION IS A VERY LONG AND ARDUOUS JOURNEY, IT'S VERY DIFFICULT TO BREAK THROUGH THE HIGHER YOU GET, THE NOVEL ALSO SHOWS THAT BY INCREASING THE AMOUNT OF QI REQUIRED;
BUT PLAYERS HAVE REACHED CLOSE TO THE SAINT REALM IN TWO MONTHS OF CULTIVATION.
FOURTH, THERE ARE NO QUESTS.
FIFTH, SOME THINGS JUST GIVES THE FEELING OF IT BEING SHORT OR INCOMPLETE (CULTIVATION SYSTEM/ ALCHEMY SYSTEM)
SIXTH, THE PART WITH SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY(IS SPIRIT CLEANSING LILY THE ONLY RARE INGREDIENT ? AND IF ITS RARE LATER THAT CONCEPT ALSO KIND OF FADED AWAY AFTER SEEING THE MC GET SO MANY OF THEM) AND IF YOU PICK THE WRONG ONE THEN ALL WILL START WILTING BUT THERE MIGHT ATLEAST BE SOME ALCHEMIST WHO MIGHT/SHOULD HAVE RESEARCHED IT, ARE THE ALCHEMISTS THAT WEAK?
AND MC WAS ABLE TO GET THEM ALL ONLY BECAUSE OF THE ALCHEMY GOD'S INHERITANCE(WHICH IS SHOWN AS A TECHNIQUE IN THIS NOVEL) .
SEVENTH, IF THE GAME WORLD IS A REAL WORLD AND THE POWERS THERE COULD BE BOUGHT INTO REALITY, THEN THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE SHOWN THE SIGNS BY NOW;I MEAN THE MC DID GO THROUGH MORTAL CLEANSING .
SUMMARY- THERE ARE TOO MANY BLANK SPOTS(LOOP HOLES)OUT THERE WHICH LEADS TO THE FEELING OF INCOMPLETENESS.
THE NOVEL COULD HAVE BEEN MADE MUCH BETTER .
Your story is well written, it has great pace, i like your world background and Raiden, to be honest i am not a big fan of horror or so but your story is great and deserves the five star and your plot is amazing, i will keep reading. Good work author.