Matthew_Stokes
An amazing book by the great author, each chapter makes my heart skip a beat....I can't wait for more updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
At first 5 chapter this novel seem have good future, not bad but atleast have some good point to develop. But after that, i really dont know what the **** with this novel. Like this one doesnt have a focus point to develop the story, it just like blind bull rampaging anything at front. First find the so called space ring with so many book yet after that it done, no more word mention about that. The next arc directly facing barbarian and their ritual, and got ***** after that. Come on, just focus one story before develop another story, it make this novel more like ****eger having chuuni delusion.
Wait. I’m I allowed to review my own story? I’m already writing one so too late now! Paramnesia is a story I started working on about a year and a half ago. Back then, I originally planned to draw a comic for this story. Which is why the first few chapters were kinda off, I had a bit of trouble turning a comic into a novel. Btw, if you look closely at the cover you’ll see the words ‘pathway to another world’ under the title, that’s because that was the original name of this story and that cover was from a long time ago so it still had that title. If anyone is curious, here’s the dictionary definition of Paramnesia.
par·am·ne·sia ˌperamˈnēZH(ē)
noun PSYCHIATRY
a condition or phenomenon involving distorted memory or confusions of fact and fantasy, such as confabulation or déjà vu.
I like using names that have meanings so if you want to know mean about the characters personalities you could search up their names. The only characters who are named after real people are the male and female main characters. Wow! This was probably longer than my chapters! Thanks for reading!
keep up the good work good book so far I like it
There is no depth and there are many cringe moments within the story. Does not grab my attention, very poor made
This is so goood!!! Keep it up bro the story and characters are amazing! I hope to see more from u ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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you should read this, cant wait for new chapters.
great story , it would be nice to have more targets , I hope the author continues writing
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