I'm enjoying this story, it's very much for my taste, I hope you keep doing your great job Autor-san! Thank you for this fanfiction!
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Boring.
Just plain.
The character is a regressor, and instantly becomes OP. Makes people accept him as their lord, gives them OP items. His cheat doesn't seem to have any cooldown or limits either, just insta-upgrade from normal to OP items or classes. MC has no background story or anything, just that he was someone who regressed and was a decent summoner in his last life. No character development at all, MC doesn't have much of a personality either. Also somehow all the "top talents" of the future are conveniently located near him, of course most of which are women. He forces people to accept the harsh truth that the apocalypse is now, and that the world now follows the laws of the jungle, he's not wrong, but the world was literally changed maybe a few hours ago and now he's enforcing jungle laws like it's his life, not surprising since he's a regressor, but annoying.
In the end, this is a boring, gary-stu, insta-bs novel, I like apocalypse game like novels a lot, but this is just rubbish. Something that seemed like author shitted out because of some contract quota.
Here's some real recommendations for apocalypse like novels
World's Apocalypse Online
Kill The Hero (not really apocalypse, but dungeons descend on earth)
The Tutorial is too hard
Everyone else is a returnee
Yes!!!!! Finally!!!! I FINALLY FOUND ONE!! YESSS IM SO HAPPY T~T THANK YOU!!! God I've been searching something like this for over haft a year now T~T.
I'm sure if I just missed it but there's no going into the game or anything.. I found the writing close together and tbh I got confused really fast. Some words like evident are overused, like in the very first paragraph of the first chapter. The characters are very unique and development is ok. I recommend hiring an editor because I see a lot of well.. grammar errors, etc. Keep writing though, your creative expression is a very healthy habit!
The book feels very fast paced however this also feels kind of correct because it feels like how a person would remember things if it happened to them like they remember the really important things and that's what matters because it's what's interesting And that's good.
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Main character is smart,cunning and knows his limits then proceeds to push past them.
Overall great but I don’t think It’ll be picked this time around.
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So, first of all, if you even want to start reading this, it's going to be very helpful that you understand on how to play League of Legends (LoL). Because the whole story is about the MC becoming a Worlds winner, it contains lots of scenes of MC playing LoL, and if you don't play LoL, it may be hard to understand what's exactly going on in the story. For example, if I told you Blitzcrank hooked Jarvan during his E-Q combo into turret range, (which you'll see later) I'm thinking some of you wont understand. Thankfully, this novel has pretty smooth descriptions about what's going on in the game. Who knows, maybe you'll start to playing LoL after reading this, especially when the actual Worlds is happening right now. To all readers, good luck and have fun.
The Author here. If i don't rate it 5 stars who will?. Do please leave comments, I like to read them and more often then not they give ideas how to develop the story.
quick question, is that fetus, happy the dragon on the cover??
I quIte literally have no idea what is hallenijg with the character or the story. The author seems fixated on makijg the characTer some sorT of edgelord god with his personality and Making gIrls around him fAll in love With him for such little reaSons