I like this Webnovel quite a bit, the whole void walker thing is pretty interesting as well
woahhh nice story got really enjoy it....moreeeeeeeerreeeeerreeeee
actually this is on par with the best of this type of genre(?) greatly underestimated because of this type. I enjoyed it to the latest Ch hoping for the author to keep it up
The synopsis and tags all seem pretty generic. It’s been so long since Webnovel published a book with an interesting premise. I don’t see anything unique or worth reading yet. Maybe I’ll check back in a few months
No romance or harem tag?? I LIKE!
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This novel has so far (chapter 40) had a very fun and interesting look on the overused cliche of the MC returning to the past with almost perfect memory of random events that happened. Personally, I fully love this novel, the characters, and hope that it continues.
I hope that this story does NOT become a Hearm and stays a honest and wholesome story about two childhood friend's love.
Here as a friend to the author. I may be biased coz I want to help him out, but I am trying my best to be critical. Coffee calls it "literary metafiction" all the time but I call it "magic mystery" for its attempt to bind fantasy with mystery together, specifically detective fiction.
Each and every chapter, the plot thickens and more mysteries are waiting to be uncovered. Good book! I recommend it for mystery lovers who want a tinge of fantasy. Or the other way around, lol---
Writing Quality: 4
- Unique linguistic skills. You know the author has passed his grammar and has studied how to write fiction. Exceptionally good at transitions! A bit nerdy though for the tattered references. From Marvel to nonfiction about chaos theory to anime I can't tell them all!!!!!!!!!!
- Coffee likes X-Men and Doctor Strange.
Stability of Updates: 5
- Has plans to update daily and then some, I can assure that.
Story Development: 3
- Downsides! I understand its literary fiction, as he says the pacing is more dragged than normal. But I'll be frank and say it has an unhealthy development after Memento Memori (catchy chapter name, I like it!) The direction its taking doesn't feel like it will go back to the problems of Mikoto Arakawa, the person who is introduced as the main heroine. I'll be waiting though
Character Design: 4
- Characters are built throughout the novel. Some characters aren't given love though, like introducing one at the start of the chapter only to not appear in the following chapters. The Light Mage rival who's named "Kuroko" (black child), for example, where?
- Has a memorable sense with names. Shirayuki, the protagonist, means Snow White. The twins Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi are based from the Japanese gods of sun and moon. The Seven Gods might be hard to figure out but when mentioned they are the shichifukujin (seven fortune gods).
World Background: 4
- Magic school in modern Japan. Mages are a different race of people separated from Humans. Mages and Humans are enemies. Simple. It only becomes complex when you consider individuality but I think that's normal.
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please continue this unlike the previous one don't stop it. The character and slow paced story is good.
Story is alright ,mc is like Wang Teng from that Attribute Picking Novel.
Bad writind, dumb mc, the author use too much parameters that he can't follow his own story.
Ridiculous, just writing numbers randomely to make space in te chapters.
The idea was good but it's just too bad.
i havent read this yet it seem that it has potential but is held back by bad grammar really hope that gets fixed
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