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Why bother posting the story here if you didn't even bother translating it or fixing it's grammar. Also it bothers me that you didn't even credited the original author or atleast in the description mentioned the link for the original.
Although I'm only at chapter 50, it only took me one chapter to get hooked on the story.
The mondial context is quite mysterious which makes the reader want to continue reading this novel.
The author did a good job. And is there any romance in this romance ?
Please answer my question THX.
Lovee it so far i hope more chp pĺlllllllllllllllls @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××÷×××××××××??????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!+
Read the first 10 chapters, not impressed.
He's a soldier, who wakes up in a forest, he starts to realize that there's magic in this world. A military system activates and acts like his Commander, and he follows orders. he thinks if he goes against the system is suicide, so future beta MC. he acts like he's cautious to everything and cold face but then he's becomes a push over that listen to a random old man. What?!
Overall Great Story. Too Complex for me to talk about it all, but in a dystopian(?) world with unique details, and characters that are lively and easy to get attached to, it is simply hard to not like it.
Haven't read it yet but keep it up! The type of novel you're writing seems exactly like what I'm looking for (no harem/romance or very little and he can abandon them, neutral evil MC, pursuing immortality through research and other means) but I usually binge read once it's at 100+ chapters.
I'm praying you write hundreds of chapters and I'll make sure to binge read and promote this as well! These types of niche novels are rare and I'm sure once you get at least 100+ chapters going, you can start building up a rating.
So for now, I'm rating it 5 stars but I'll be back in the future to binge this! Keep up on the novel, you've got this!
Giving a review after a few chapters , I read it and I would say the novel is actually developing nicely .I like the author's writing style. it makes it interesting .
5 star, no reason just read it
The story is decent and was solid I must say. This hooks right you up at the start! Also this novel is up to my alley. Can't wait to finish this one out. Also, a nice description of the narrations, frighteningly splendid!