When are you going to update???
The story is good but has some dark reality (abusive relationships). It would be so much better with proper editing and proof reading. It's like reading a 1st draft of a story. It feels like a very young person wrote it as well.
Wow amazing, finally Samantha is convinced to go with Aaron.
I am loving, I wish Damon would be fine
I could not stop reading this. can't wait for more chapters!
i seriously hate haram novels
Extraordinary David (Transcendent David) Mc is a sniper and one of the good ones
Overall average. Most MMO novels will be similar to this. I guess the romance/sm*t was okay, but not anything to write home about. The ending imo wasn't too bad. The story itself is very repetitive but that's what makes an MMO an MMO. I particularly liked the competition in this novel in comparison to other novels. a solid 6.5/10, would recommend it if bored and you wanted to beat your meat to words.
I´ll try I guess, I´ve read the description and that stopped me last time I was about to start it... thanks for recommendation
Sadly couldn't get far due to the MTL and his name flip-flopping from Vikir to Bikir repeatedly within chapters.
FUN FACT THERE'S ACTUALLY A CHARACHTER IN THE PRIMORDIAL HUNTER CALLED YIP OF YORE WHO DOES THE SAME
Came back just to comment. So now we will never see Aiden win an oscar or a Grammy
Great story;!