A story with wish fulfilment and a harem. not a big one but a harem.
Bryan Best gets a system and rises to the top. It is the journey which I am trying to show or maybe the fun he had along the journey.
Note: the previous version was discarded by me because it was the first time I was writing a novel and I couldn't make it Bryan centric. The MC had become an NPC in the novel which is why I redid the entire thing.
Ending remarks - No NTR in any way. I mean no lesbian ntr too. Just to be clear. Bryan will be a playboy and might **** chicks outside his harem those won't be added to the main harem. may not even show up in the story later. I don't want to restrict myself here so making it clear beforehand. The story had strong sexual themes and may trigger people so reader discretion advised.
A solid start to a semi-serious cultivation story. I think there's a lot here to like. My problem with these types of lighthearted cultivation stories is all to often they fall into the tropes that they are satirizing, and they often end up with an incoherent plot. And while this one is so far doing okay on the plot front its definitely treading some familiar ground. All in all the novel ends up perhaps a little less outright "funny" than the best in the genre, but if you actually enjoy cultivation novels, and don't mind a bit of humor on top this one has a lot of potential.
Loved the plot. Story is well written, interactions are the strong part. There are a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with proofreading. Good job!
Great story. Very addictive. I first read this book about 18years ago but, getting it in this app is mind blowing. Still very excited to read it.
The way the scenes and actions are described is really detailed as if the events were actually experienced by the author himself and was just retelling it to us readers. It was a cool experience!!!
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it is a very good book but i dont know if it is dropped because the last comments on this book on the last chapter are from 1 year ago so auther if this book is dropped please make more chapter because this is a really good book and i dont want to see it end...please make more.
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Aye I really enjoyed reading this! :D
Writing-wise, great, no noticeable mistakes. Also, the writing style is amazing hehe! It was interesting, and it has a smooth flow :D
I also love the system, I think it's pretty cool, especially since I really really like history/fable themed stuff, like cough-orv-cough so this is exactly my cup of tea :D
Best part is the MC tho :D I like the way he thinks hehe!
Great work, author! <3
The mc is funny but few chapter later his personality start to annoy us. But there is character growth and the author doesn't kill off MC's loved one to give him motivation to get stronger, he lives in abyss and after awakens and start to cultivate he finds that strength is a must to survive and his 'young master' attitude starts to change.When he understand that his clans background give him a safe space and limit his growth he leave the empire and starts a journey.
If you are planning on dropping the novel pls wait till 40-50 chapter the mc's character changes along with his strength.
The cat partner is funny, the author should write side chapter about the litte halfling who follows cat dao
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a SUPERB and Worth While READ...
Review Proper after chapter 12
Writing Quality. The narratives are well-written and zero grammar errors so far. Or if there are some, I'm just engrossed reading the story to notice
Don't know anything about this book.but I have voted for it as the word 'sword' got my attraction. Would read soon after I finish my book I am reading now.