The story has a lot of potential and I absolutely love it. HOWEVER, as the story progresses, the author made a lot of mistakes along the way: plot holes, a strange naming sense, poor world-building (lacks originality), arcs that drag on because the MC needs to collect his Pokémon (females), and obviously dubious and unsettling romance.
There are many things I strongly disagree with, especially the Harem— (In fact, it would give more personality to the character if he only ended up with one person, but that's just me and my strong desire to ship Camus with Vikir.) However, most of you will probably agree that the author should have stick with just two female leads, because when Dolores and Sinclaire were introduced, the first two, Camus and Aiyen, got less screen time. This is disappointing since we had already built a strong attachment to them but the author basically forgot about them.
really? it's actually MTL? from which chapter? i've been waiting for it to get at least 470ch to be translated before start reading and hoping it's fully translated by the time i catch up.
I dunno it was early on on here. Around 13 or so, when you start seeing Bilkin and other mistranslations. I hear at 67+ another translator took over, not sure if they fix it on this site and I know this site is fickle if you mention other places for reading.
