Inevitable_Chicken
I agree but if you don't like someone who has been actively pursuing u for like 5-6 years you shouldtell them. Oh and this isn't a secretive pursuit like he didn't know and she isn't making it obvious. I think it becomes a moral dilemma at that point. Oh and them being normal friends and no feelings can I think happen only in normal situations. Its different when a person becomes a shining light in your life. He was the only person to talk and teach her and they are similar in age. It is nearly improbable that one wouldn't have any feelings to explore about the other. Please just read this book then give me ur thoughts. Because My arguments only pertain to the situations story and not anything else.
I have only problem with one thing and that is your strong hold or your foundation is not strong on your story everything else is really good I mean really good it's just you are taking your story in fast way that's also good thing but you are not developing your main characters feeling not telling us how he feels because if you want to make your correct likeable by everybody you have to show some kind of emotions like anger soup your tea complex and defeating his own emotion by some kind of incident everything, this way he can understand and we can understand that he is developing in the story even though he has power he should understand or you should make us feel that is this character is real in our imagination and the story by showing us or letting us feel his emotion bye elaborating every small details if you can in his life that way you will make your story better even better than this is right now
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This is great, can't wait for the fiesty parts. Keep up the good work author.
Amazing writing from Andre Parker! Love seeing the story come to life. [img=update]
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Good story....I've enjoyed it...
love this book hope it gets updated soon I want to know what is going on.
Loved the happy ending
How to vote on this book?i really love yo read this
Such a great story!!!
