This is a great story, and honestly i dont quite understand why there are such a small number of reviews, hope you keep writing, thanks for the amazing read :D
I am just doing this for SS ...............
I'm shamelessly give this 5 star, just because i'm the author but, i will solemnly accept any kind comment wheater is good or bad and thank's for looking
The plot is really good and loved the character personas XD. I WANT MORE!
I have high expectations from this book
Hope you publish the chapters on a basis.
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I loved this book... M.C doesn't act like a god and the villains don't just wait for M.C to beat the shit out of them ... the book is pretty realistic not like the ones where M.C just time travels and hogs all resources ... completely deserving 5 stars..
As of chapter 47Writing Quality: 4/5Some spelling and grammer mistakes throughout the story. However this does not spoil the story and can be easily understood despite the minor mistakes. Story Development: 5/5Despite only being 47 chapters so far, the story development is interesting. The fact that the author plays the role of VR extremely prominently is nice, but it would be more interesting if the MC backstory was shown as well. The battle scenes are done really well in this novel. The fact that the intro of the game (trailer) gave the storyline a strong foothold is interesting as other authors tend to not use such things. This is very unique to this story so i give the author props for implementing this unique dynamic.Character Design: 4/5This takes into account that the novel is only 47 chapters long so far. There is little background information on the MC. How well to do his family is, etc. (there is some information but not alot). The side characters are not really evident at this point besides the female lead (potential love interest). Only some names are being thrown around here and there without any interesting or distinct facts about them.Updating Stability: 5/5I do not know the stability of the update as I read all 47 chapters in a day. I just place 5/5 as I consider it stable until further notice.World Background: 5/5The trialer of the game provided a good base for the VR world background. This is done better than most other novels. However, since this is a relatively new novel, there is a lot of room for world background expansion. I hooe the author can continue on this path as the expanaion of the world's background is exoanding at a nice pace.Overall: 4.6/5The story is really interesting and one that I will continue to follow. This is one of the better newer novels on this site. I think people should pick this up to read at least until this point. The MC can be considered overpowered in some manner (compared to other players), but the content is still really interesting. Hope the author continues to work hard on this novel ?
ha another review from you know who.. anyway I love this this book couse its amazing. yeah..................................................
This story was great the plot and specially it's characters. And for me, I really like it so much that I will recommend it to others for them to read. I'm not being bias here, it just that it get to my heart and my mind. I wish you will give us some wonderful work in the future. Thank you!!! I really love it. Fantastic and magnificent, I think this words can describe how perfect your story is. Even though that I'm more on, in an action story with a touch of fantasy, I really really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable, also I really like it, thank so much
Not bad, world building is pretty solid. There are some commenters insisting on spoon-feeding. They lack the capability of just a bit of critical thinking. Overall something a bit different and very welcome.
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