Good plot it remind me TDG. novel start with character development
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I don't get why this book is rated so highly. I wouldn't waste your time, it's racist af as others have mentioned and the mc is a beta.
One thing that pisses me off is that the female lead isn't fierce... she is an absolute raging btch. Like there is a difference in the two that the author seems to not know.
It was fine when she didn't submit etc bit stupid but yeah. Then it went through the whole faze of them getting closer and It would have been cool af if they grew up like a prober fam. So she and the mc with acc love getting stronger in that time with the kids.
But instead she "awakens" This completely destroys the story and it goes downhill that doesn't stop. I'm surprised how fast it crashed and burned... I mean nobody wants to read a story where the main character is a btch. Like I said before the author can't seem to tell the difference and thinks fierce translates to arrogance, btch, and literally all them shtty character traits.
SO yeah don't waste your time. Unless you like the character I described which I am shocked if you do but yeah...
novel is good so far.... just updating it is taking too long....i wish i could capture the author and make him right 100 chapters per day.
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The plot is a bit unique as most cultivation novels with a heaven defying protagonist don't have transmigration in it as well. But I haven't seen much reference to the transmigration aspect in the initial chapters, as in character doesn't behave like a 21 century person, he's very used to the new world.
There are several noticible grammatical errors. I'm not sure if that is due to lack of skill or just due to rushed writing, because the author updates very often. The general writing is a bit off in some parts, not sure if it is intentional
The story is just so good.
It just keeps you wanting for more.
But the author is cruel, cutting when it is about to reveal an important info.
This would officially be the first time I would review a book under the genre Video games and I'm glad I am now.
Jake's character for one thing isn't the usual brooding bad boy or dumb at first and well interestingly has a disablity (for now I think). The first chapter was a little fast paced and few grammar errors but not one we can't overlook. I have confidence with the next chapters, it's bound to be a masterpiece.
The next chapters took a drastic turn as Patina his sister mysteriously committed suicide
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Very good story
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Finally kingdom/Settlement building novel. At first look it seem promising. Reading in now and so far it is good. Will update later when read completely.
Me interesa mucho esta novela, no hay muchas de starcraft y la vedad queria una
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