Troxking
Hello, guys, your dear author is here, I just wanted to say that my English is not good because English is not my first language, but I am trying very hard to improve myself, please keep loving and keep supporting my work.
I will not die not for someone else this is the sypnosis
But why do you have romance isnt that will make the story the opposite of your story
what the heck is with these preview chapters, there is a huge chunk of info missing and it is annoying.
you miss so much information, so you need to try and fix it.
Great novel hope to get new release fasterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
This book is well charactered with many different scenes that spike up my curiosity. The setting was designed so well that I could see the actual scene in my head. I wonder how you wrote such a magnificent book!
Are you really trying to copy " I'm a Qudrillonaire" thinking people wouldn't notice because you changed character names..... ......
Great story I still remember when it had only 28 chapters ach time run soo fast but I stared to read your another work and waiting for more chapter
I'm sorry, is this Webnovel have ties with the Child from the Dungeon Webnovel, I really like the cover's design and it seems the MC or whoever it is on the cover looks more like Duncan Grimshaw but with Donovan's shadows around it.
honestly couldn't tell if I even liked the story as they were only three short chapters available to read and chapters 4 through 25 are paywalled by Amazon. which is stupid as most cultivation novel readers don't even know whether they like a cultivation novel until somewhere between chapter 15 and 30 and that's dependent on other factors such as the length of chapters and how much content was in those chapters. so those are key chapters to hooking in new readers to support you on your patreon or whether they want to read more and by the book off Amazon. your marketing strategy is stupid as you don't show enough content to actually hook in new readers to want to buy it.
Your books are always amazing. The beginning hooked me. You want to understand and read more in every chapter. Diamond is a good person and may be thats why the system chose her for her kindness. looking forward to more chapters.
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This looks promising!
I will read it and hope that it is indeed good.
Hope you won't drop this and thanks for the effort!
Bye!!!
by LittleGluttonSlime
