Please do more this is amazing and I cant wait for more this is one of the better novels on this app aNd its not trashy at all i hope there is more because i live this novel
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the story kept me hoked from the start, it is so well described, that i can imagine everything in front of my eyes, the author has done a good work in making every thing realistic.
The story has a very interesting hook and great world building. My only big criticism is that the grammar is very poor, and the spelling of names and terms can be inconsistent, making it hard to follow. It would benefit greatly from an editor, or even just machine grammar checking.
this is just pure Chinese propaganda, they even made Trump a 'ccp agent' did the chinese author really think that every country has the "ccp" system
This is good stuff. It's kinda a slow build up type of novel(also short chapters cmon bruh) but it's all good. world back ground hasn't made much actual progress(we see how the people view things and all but that's nothing but a brick in its foundation). character is good and quite consistent from what I read (1-20 chapter). Stability of Updates? c'mon webnovel can't you not suck any further? I'm genuinely woried about the path y'all decided to take.
This is stupid but if you don't have anything more interesting to do you could give it a try.Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzbzndjsnznznnznznsnsnsnnsnsnsnsnsnsnsnzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
The premise and novel systems are really eye-catching. This really seems like it has potential to break the mold. But for the love of my life, the grammar and the abstract wording used here are life-draining. Author, please edit your chapters from the beginning or pay someone to do so. You can hire mw if you want. The only good thing I can say about the writing is that it is at most understandable. Too bad, the plot is nice.
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The girlfriend (June) is a woman who conveniently managed to be MC's girlfriend and now wants to dominate him... Will the story have a beta MC?Having a girlfriend, made Mc begin to have symptoms of the typical pathetic and virgin Asian protagonist in a harem manga or anime.Author, you're great at writing, but don't make a pathetic, submissive MC who gets on his knees and begs for attention from his cheating girlfriend.€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€€Why do asian stories have only 2 types of male leads?Beta "male" protagonist and schizophrenic psychopathic "male" protagonist.