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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hi guys, I'm sorry to announce next week, I won't upload any chapter(maybe) , My editor-san and I will fix all grammar and might change some of the storyline starts from Prologue, I will give the fix chapter tag (N). Once Again Sorry
-Author-nim
the mc is no longer male, place the story in the female lead section --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This story is fun. I can see this story becoming more intense as the story progresses. Content wise it's incredible I'm hoping to read this in my spare time.
I like the story so far and the story do not focus to much on the the female lead.
That might be my problem with the story, also. so far as I have read, thr emperior malelear seem to dominate more of the developmet of the story and plot morr then the female lead as the resume would make you belive.
But overall it is a good story and worth too read if you like the genere.
The story is really good! It is mixture of mystery and modern fantasy that is entertaining to read. The character dynamic is really fun aswell but the main character isn't really active. Keep it up author!
I had read a few funeral system type novel before, but from what I read here, it seems different. What I read before is all "I'm gonna help Bury you, then you will explode treasure chest or attribute.".While if this synopsis is not misleading or bragging, then it's the type where it will help you set up an epic death.. Hurm...
Im giving a shameless 4 stars that may be undervaluing the novel however i have not read it i just want to express my hope for this book as i like to binge 100+ ch at a time. Take my power stones and I wish you a good future with this book
4 stars for me.Just read 10 chapters, I wish to read a little bit more but I find a point in the novel where I'm sure many people would drop it.Let's go to the facts;- MC characters is... awful, it's clear that he was a childish and incapable person previously. He has no ambition whatsoever and is very impulsive in his behavior. He doesn't reflect upon his actions nor think about his future.All in all, is quite distateful as a main character, for me he seemed like a random character in a book who died later on.-World building: In this aspect I can say that is well written, although there's nothing crazy, it fits quite well and you don't have a hard time imagining it. Pretty solid.-Interactions: This is a point where I think that while it's not bad, it can improve much more. It's okay but seemed somewhat lacking. There's also little monologues or other tools that could tell us what the MC and other characters think about their situations.All in all, it could clearly improve.-System?: Yes, there's a question mark there, because I keep wondering myself in these 10 chapters, is that really a system? It feels more like a shop.Story wise, i see a clear problem with the novel, which is, the main character.There's no signs or whatsoever that he could improve, there's no goals and anything like that in these chapters that could give you the hope to keep reading it.There's also another point I wish to say this early, is quite simple to see how the author didn't wished to point out in the development of some business or something for the MC, I'm aware this isn't a kingdom building novel, whoever, knowing how his system function, is clearly somewhat a cheat if he could gain quite amount of money, which would ease out his problems. But since this would eliminate the drama and plot for the author, since there would be little to no struggle for the MC, there's no words nor indication from the MC in that aspect.Like a said, 4 stars novel, which is quite good in web novel standard.Just hope for the Main character personality to improve since it makes harder for me to keep reading it.Wish you good luck and success author.
Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ".Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" .*squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
the MC is pretty much a decent nice guy which makes him pretty boring even now that he is a skeleton like many other isekai what I never got the point about turning the MC into monster/undead etc. if they are still gonna act human in all the ways possible. At least put some conflict in the persona, not asking for psycho killer maniac. Skipped most of the fights for the most part they are meh, the spells are convenient maybe too much feels like author avoids showing them in the level up so he can pull whatever helps him progress through the next fight. Something interesting needs to happen soon or least that comedy needs to show.