I enjoyed reading your story, even though I normally don’t go for this genre. If i may make the suggestion; perhaps try to elaborate more about each character? I think I would be able to feel even more for them. I get a good feeling from it and hope you will continue, I plan on checking out your other work as well.
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Make another emergency food, please, but not with Painon xD
Came looking for the real VW: CCM only to find this... Sad to see that something like this is here on the new site I’m trying to learn how to use..
I took a quick look at the later episodes, and as far as I understand, there's not much harem stuff, and the stupid person at the beginning is still alive in the later episodes. And he's shown more, not less, as if he's the main character. Anyway, have a good time you.
When new Chapter ??
Nice novel love the main charackter but there
should Something happen with lucas amd ethan ( Like go training etc.)
Well not much to say as the story was past face and pretty exciting, so I really liked it even though purely romance novels is not my cup of tea
Perfect idea but was not edited properly like the quality terms for talent always changed and other stuff like that
So far so good. I have loved this piece of work.
This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it...Yes, I had commented on this in the past, but it was deleted... T_T, I'll just go here as a reminder, sigh.About the novel, give it a try, as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I improved as the volumes went on. I hope you like it.
20 capítulos arrastrando la pelea de puto pájaro llorón puta historia asquerosa
Author has confirmed that there will NOT be Romance or Harem. So if that's not worth 5 Stars idk what is.Can't think of an actual review atm, so I'll just update it when this has more chapters.