I never read anything like this before, but this was definitely worth the read. The story is deep the characters are well written and the concept is just something out of the ordinary.
- Recommends reading this!
Amazing development of the storyline!!..
Its a good story......I just hope that it might go on like kingdom manga..........that story is a long term one and i want this to be a long term one as well.......
CREATIVE!
I really appreciated how the author created an own world and portrayed it in words beautifully. The plot is intriguing and unique. The character design and the conversations(mainly the comparisons) are done well.
Overall, it is a nice read!! Will continue reading!!
Keep Going!!
I have to start off this review saying this books writing quality, is impeccable! Perfect spelling so far, no grammatical errors. However the one criticism I have over writing is description.
Description is good, but when there's to much of it, it gets out of hand and leaves nothing to the imagination. Besides that I love the description over the characters, they seem so beautiful, and likable so far as well.
Certain areas are confusing as to whether it's a flashback or current time. So besides that this book is pretty epic this far and I'd suggest it to anyone who's looking for an assassin like story with elemental background!
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this novel isn't even cliché anymore, this novel is a bad copy of some popular novels, the begining is just so much like LOHP.the comment section is fun as everyone is predicting what will happen 30 chapters before it happens.still, i can't understand how webnovel put this trash this high in term of ratings and advertisement
i've only read the first few chapters so i dont know how good this is but can someone tell me if this is inspired by overgeared bc some things seem similar to it
Only read a few chapters, but what I can say, this book is creative. Usually I don’t pick up video game novels on here, but this one drew me in.Galanar has a way with words and I already know the character development and action will only get better. The world building flows like a live action and I have to remind myself I’m reading. ? don’t pass this up, and the author definitely deserves gifts, golden tickets, and power stones. He literally shoots chapters out for his fans, and let me tell you. More than two chapters a day is defficult for me even. So please support him! The more time he has to be able to sit and type at the computer the more chapters you’ll get. Let’s get him at the top. ?
Okay so this story is still in the beginning phase but I have no qualms that it's going to be big. The opening chapter is catchy and everything else is. The characters I have seen so far are shrouded in mystery and they really make me want more. I don't review much but this story has a really good start.
This story is about a MC that is betrayed by people he trust and protected before jumping off the cliff and being reincarnated (but feels more like a transmigration). The storyline is fairly solid and is generally enjoyable to read.I rated this a 3.8, primarily because of the annoying plot armor that saves the MC, time after time due his 'machonism' to take on more than he can handle or unwillingness to be looked down upon. The MC just never seems to learn from his mistakes and as of late, his wariness of being used and betrayed again seems to be gone, replaced by your typical headstrong hero who voluntarily becomes the kingdom's savior.The MC is a sword master, but as of ch 90 or so, he has been in life and death situations saved only by plot armor without even wielding a sword all because he wants to experience his other skills according the author's comment.The harem element also seems forced, such as the random cat girl that saves the MC just has he was about to be killed after being greedy for some spirit plant.
So good I hope the rest of a story will be translated. I adored it<3 Asdgghjllandjzizjqixneuhxhzuzuwuwiwisjzjxncnxmznzmssmskksskeiwiiwiwiwieirurjrjhrbrbfbxbxxnnzznnzznmaamakkalapqpqowieiriririrufjhxxbbxbnxnnnznnznzmakakqoowowieirieirideiduuruehebrbvv