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It's a great concept but, sadly, it has been very poorly executed (I think an 8 yr old could have written it better)Crazily fast-paced progression makes his "accomplishments" seem uninterestingly mediocre at best...The fact that he becomes a man-slut as soon as he gets "powers" just makes it even more boring to read...Closing Remark(s): This novel isn't worth the effort it would take to think of one...
Weak piece.There is no logic and consistency in the actions of the characters. The main character of the MC who receives bonuses simply by the decision of the author without making any efforts or at least justification.In fact, the characters have not been identified, therefore, in 40 chapters, I cannot myself compose a portrait of any of them.Reading from time to time you make a facepalm in the hope that the author will be able to improve the quality, but this does not happen.Drop at the moment of stupidity with the kidnapping of the girl and the subsequent actions of the characters.
Since my previous review was deleted and I woke up like 5 minutes ago I will keep this short and simple. Characters: Entertaining and fleshed out. Chapter length: Just right. Story progression: A bit slow but completely fine. Thank you for letting me know that my previous review got deleted author sama. I highly recommend to new readers.
Rushed. Thats the biggest probelm. MC gets everything handet to him at the Start. SSS+ abilty, all the girls and huge plot armor. The characters all feel bland and there is literally no world building what so ever. Dropped at chapter 80.
Fellow Indian writing Novel, I can only say one thing ;) Indians Assemble
Not good at righting reviews so I’ll keep it short it’s a really good story that it .
I'm waiting for the story to be more developt before making my review but I really enjoy it so what the h*ll. I love the story, I like the development, the world background. If the updates can became like 14 a week it will be great.
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It's going well so far and the updates are coming out lots which is great. And the story seems to be developing well. I like how you are focusing on the eyes instead of cultivation to which makes it different to many others.
yo bro please update more chapters for more readers more more more more chaptersssssssss and please DO NOT DROP THIS NOVEL...............................................................................................................................
I am not usually into gaming and cultivation but I really like this one, the book is well written and our Master Mo has a nice mouth, I have got a hunch that the author is a gamer, never mind. Love the book, give it a try.Keep going!