tut mir leid, tut mir nicht leid :)

dropping the translation quality like this after the free trial is just a scam, trying to trick some people into batch unlocking chapters without noticing.

Here I am to leave myself a review with shame in hand. Now don't get me wrong Im not gonna leave a real review I just want to say to anyone following my writing welcome to the second book in the myriad realms, thanks for sticking around!

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Hi and good evening or afternoon/morningI have finally finished editing the first chapter of this book and let me just say it wasn't as easy as I thought it would beWhoever thinks editing a book is easier that writing one doesn't know what he/she is talking aboutAnyways, I'll really appreciate if you guys can just look through the new first chapter and tell me if it's better that beforeAt least I'll know I'm actually achieving somethingThank in advance, Your Writer

Rushed. Thats the biggest probelm. MC gets everything handet to him at the Start. SSS+ abilty, all the girls and huge plot armor. The characters all feel bland and there is literally no world building what so ever. Dropped at chapter 80.

"Take cover on the bridge!" Kakashi ordered, pointing down the bridge for emphasis. "Now!"