Morrrrrrrre! I neeeeeeeeeeeed morrrrrrrrrre!
I find the actual story to be decent, not anything great but not anything terrible either. The only reason I gave the story a 2.6 overall rating is because of character development and character plot. I personally think this whole tournament arc is useless to the story and the fact that in this story, power is everything and it somehow makes the whole situation with his mother and siblings ok, that kind of character development isn’t really my cup of tea.
Liking the novel so far. Well except when the Mc became a bit soft hearted. but I think, he could’ve explain things a bit better than as for why would the Mc suddenly do that. It just kinda ticks off the readers a bit, because as far as they know the Mc is a bit cold blooded....
I like this book.Uff 140 characters huh.Hopefully it gets picked.Still not 140 huh.This mc has many things in commen with me?Bla bla bla.Bye.
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OP power wasted on an MC thats a bit stupid, he even forgets about it a bit, has perks available at tier 1 gets it then forget about the other perks oh also a beta mc, writings ok, story dev ok, world building ok, update speed is fast, character is meh, will still read hoping the mc will improve