Yup, this is great. Need more chapters. MC seemed to have its own qualities and 3vem though it's a little farfetched I still like it. Continue the good work author.
overall pretty good, can't even think of any constructive criticism.
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Good translation speed, world building, characterization, plot development...really, Everything is good except the MC.I don’t get why that is. Side characters are great, but the MC seems to not be tethered at all! He’s the type of MC that’s selfish, stupid, stubborn and arrogant but genuinely believes that he’s DOING GOOD despite causing world-wide (economic, politic, and social) disasters, misery, and destroying innocent lives all over the place. A bad sexist hypocrite at his finest. At this point, I honestly believe that it’s only plot armour that prevents the rest of humanity from banding together and eliminating him before he causes more harm.
"no way bro, you can see the boss drops"'yeah man I can see them that one is the sword of time, that one is the chest piece of rangiku, and that one is someone's bathwat- uhh no its actually my drink for tonight'"how bro, when ever I kill them i just get a bunch of air.... This is soo unfair how dare the heavens forsake me like this"
This is honestly my first time reading a webnovel, I've only read the first chapter before sleep but I'm already expecting alot from thisThe only issue with it is the consistency, I've viewed the release date of every chapter and I understand if the author has some issues irl due to him not updating the novel but it just ticks me off.Overall, for my first webnovel it's good.
bad story telling and world building but concept is good I feel bored j f dd d f f d
why is one of the tags beautifulfemale lead isnt the protagnist a malewhy is one of the tags beautifulfemale lead isnt the protagnist a male
To start this is not a story for everyone the author is developing the novel with serious themes like problems of fitting into a reality, how people behave and act on it even not liking it and the need for when people should be realistic and when they should put a mask to hide .And a good story and grammar also without much problems . The storyline is geared towards the teen audience but with a lot of drama from what was read our MC male simplifying and a simp has trouble relating to people and therefore hides behind a mask of falsehood and so the story unfolds the female MC and all the inverse of it is open with everyone and a great judge of character knowing when someone is lying or not that causes your problem in the story , relationship between them start because of this point
Honestly and the typical Japanese cliché story with love triangles between characters, annoying dialogues that makes your head hurt, think of it as oregairu only worse, honestly this kind of story is only for people who like this genre if not you will have to put up with a lot
Don't be discouraged, author, your story is just not for everyone anyway, keep up your good work
Reading the first chapter I thought it could be an interesting story, but turned out to be a waste of time.
There is no plot advancement whatsoever cause the mc spends all his time training and nothing else. There is no character development cause the mc spends all time training and doesn't even meet other characters. He is also dumb and, worst of all, he is one of those persons that turn the system into his wife or some such nonsense...
Honestly, this story is really bad and a waste of time...
ah yes finally a decent monster book it has been decades since I found a good one all the others are fools hahahahahhhahhaahhahahahahhahaahhhaaaaaaaaa
Very good please webnovel gods pick it up
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