the pendant of the abyss

I love the concept and the beginning is interesting

those lines about the protagonist being a smart pansy and the rest of others are dumb as a log just to highlight him is really hard to read,it is too extreme and to be honest cringe.When he himself doesn't act that smart or matureThe narrative is not that good with a lot of unnecessary immature cursing at random things.But the plot is nice and I liked most of the support character

After reading 130+ chapters (thanks for the raws) here's what I can say.In my opinion, people are exaggerating about the patriotism in the novel. MC cares about his family+girl above everything, but also wants to help his country whenever possible. Why? He literally lived through the destruction and massacre of his country's population. It would be rare if that didn't affect him. In fact, I could even say he is selfish. He doesn't help others out of patriotism, he does it because he wants to form his own team to fight demons. He's trying to save the world on his own terms.   With that out of the way, it is very readable. MC is definitely OP since he has obtained multiple rewards that although separately are good, combined in the same person make him progress very quickly. However, this is somewhat balanced with the fact that demons are way stronger than humans. As a result, he keeps having to fight enemies quite above his level. Anyways, I suggest you don't let comments about racism/nationalism dissuade you, it's not as bad as some are making out to be.

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I must admit that these an original story well conceived but I'm sorry to say that you make a story based on a single goal saving her mother from a so-called disease of which nothing is known and whether humanity can actually cure her or not these due to the lack of relevant information at first instead of focusing on the essentials. What saddens me the most these why you want to make a one-piece style story that never ends because no matter the one-piece type story all The endings will look sloppy because of all the plotholes its would have been better to make his mother a goal for 1 arc and then change for another but not the the objective is to find an object that is supposed to fulfill the wishes, these the dumbest thing to do especially in order to save someone sick after all you want to tell me that he will find it after only some month of research while the others one searches for a long time how his mother will live until then.To finish this story could have been serious if the objective had not been so childish I know that you supposedly want to show us the determination of the MC to save his mother but the "quest for the one piece" turn it into a stupid joke from my point of view

"no way bro, you can see the boss drops"'yeah man I can see them that one is the sword of time, that one is the chest piece of rangiku, and that one is someone's bathwat- uhh no its actually my drink for tonight'"how bro, when ever I kill them i just get a bunch of air.... This is soo unfair how dare the heavens forsake me like this"