Loving the story It's a common plot, but the storyline is what makes this interesting. It's also good to see the main character mature. The world-building is amazing and just add some new twist and it will be remarkable. #Loveit??
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Hmmmm, One of my friends has written a good story, a tale of a man with a beast trapped inside of him, I can understand. The exploration of his development seems to be the main focus of the story.Good job Swan
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Love the story and glad it’s back after the long pause. If you can tolerate the grammatical errors plz do, and if not put a comment with corrections, there’s no need to throw a hissy fit in the reviews.
I love face-smack novels huhu. This is an easy read, perfect for after work when you gotta turn off your brain. Despite being another typical face-smack story that unfolds in an almost predictable manner, this is actually humorous. Nothing too complicated.
Water. Water. One water.
20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering.
Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions.
The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel.
And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for?
From the pros, MC. Nice world.
But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.
More plz! More plz!More plz! More plz!More plz! More plz!More plz! More plz!
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Fartsama approves
Way to disappointed I m with the story and also with you author
I m not want to force my opinion but new chapters make me disgust about mc ant the novel
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
This book is promising. I instantly love the characters. I hope I can get to know them better in the coming chapters. And longer chapters, please.