This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it'sminor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!
le commencement des événements est très intéressant
Seriously a powerful couple. I love female lead how she got able to lead her whole clan. She is cool. And i like how the story is going. Loving it
A very entertaining novel which has interesting characters interacting with each other to produce drama, humour and intrigue. Didn't expect a lot while reading this story, however while reading it I came to really enjoy it.
Amazing story line.... you can almost feel that you are living the story..bang on character timing, suspense and great use of words translating the emotions of the character... must read for all age groups...good job writer?
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The reason I started reading this novel is because it's rare to see a pirate story that isn't a one piece fanfic and the system and world seems unqiue and with lots of potential.The reason I did not give 5 star or that one day I may drop it is because the MC hasn't done a single thing that the system hadn't told him to do like (run here) or (say this). This is obviously my personal opinion but I enjoy system type novel where the system only assists the MC and not one where the MC is overly reliant or even subservient to the system.I hope things will slowly change after a few chapters.
Read it if you like harem and obscene parts!
I can tell that you made an effort making an uncommon world background! It was fun and little unique. Hope you continues to produce this with the same quality. Good job!
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this novel is nice, it leave a trademark on young generations like me. some parts are kinda confusing because of typographical errors and no punctuation, but all in all it describes daily lives of people and fun to read!
124k views and not one review? Are you srs well at least I have the honor of being first review can’t wait for volume 2. 140 characters 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000