Good story marred with many of the same problems that all regressor-vmmorpg stories have:1) Equipment is never changed - until way too late, if you want to press your advantages you will of course make sure that you are wearing the best equipment, feeding the growing weapon with as many weapons as possible to increase your stats, etc.2) Not learning skills - I understand that you have the Versatile class and have to manage many skills, this does not prevent you from learning all of the passive skills instead of leaving the skill points sitting there, once again you are in a race against time.3) Trying to act "low key" - This is the stupidest thing ever, you want power? Being a lone strong person doesn't help, he needs allies, fame and fortune. Let people know how important it is to be by your side.4) Money - He said he would help his parents, and yet, nothing so far (or maybe I missed it)And my last point, work on the grammar and sentence construction, sometimes it feels awkward.
