Saw the number of chapter so i wasn't tempted to read but when i gave it a try. It wasnt that bad. Its actually pretty good. And I see it going somewhere If it doesnt deviate
While there is world building at the start, the introduction of Xing Tian as the ‘Asian girl’ is a bit disconnected in the first two chapters. It is systematically written and there is a lot of hard work done on the novel. The novel probably belongs to the cyberpunk genre . Just a personal opinion on my part, it is a nuance but each new character generation tend to be a little choppy at the start. This choppiness isn’t a grammatical issue but rather how the content flows. Fight/combat scenes while described, requires more action, shorter description to give it an ‘action’ feel. However it is my personal preference. Others may prefer in depth descriptions. Overall, nice work!
Amazing! Very original. Love the blend of magic and tech. This is definitely one of the more original authors on this site, but if you haven't yet read the first two of this series Evolutionary Prisoner, and Evolutionary Convict I highly recommend that you go back and start from there :)
I'm really loving it so far. The characters are fun and lovable! This whole series balances humor and seriousness pretty well so far. Excited to see what happens in ch. 5. I don't really do reviews but this series just seems to ooze natural promise and potential! ?≧◉ᴥ◉≦
Story is slow as hell, chapter 118 and almost no progress still, every major thing that's happening so far is revolved completely around woman even major fights so far are either made by woman or ordered others to do it by women and the talk going on by mc and people in void is all random junk just to fill up the chapter and no actual number is mentioned on how many people are in void so how many people that talk so far may increase to further waste a chapters worth of a read on nonsense that is just ment to waste time for a easy buck.
Finally a system novel that has a new take and isn’t super op or cynical yandere or tsundere or sadistic etc hope the author keeps this pace
I don't think I need to explain why it's 1 star, the other reviews explains it. It's just that bad I guess. Feel free to read though if you want to.
This is the second review I put out for this story I absolutely love it it has a good pace the main character is likable and the staff work on it are amazing they care they take time to personally check every comment respond they're even willing to take feedback this story has a Lotta potential and considering how good it already is that's saying something
Honestly, the novel is pretty good plot wise and MC is also not braindead, I like this type of smart calculating MC who knows how to act. The intermissions between acting scenarios are quite boring though. And what's worse.. the enemies follow the young master syndrome, there's not even one random enemy. The first enemy is an old enemy from real world, the second enemy is HIS MOM, and the third scenario's enemy IS HER GUILDMATE. Like WTH is the author memeing it? He destroyed his own plot with this b*llsh*t.
I’ve been woth dawn for a long time now. I especially enjoy his i reincarnated as a stick and succ even more. I have been with the old version sonce the beginning and remember it if you are reading this blabbering it means you have a lot of time to waste because i don’t know how to write reviews without spoiling stuff so sorry for wasting your time and enjoy succ**: an incredibly annoying character that will appear later on called yang billian will appear be careful of hating her to the extreme because that’s the kind of character she is. HATEFUL BILLIAN!!
Pretty fun read! The MC is quite OP but weak in martial but it explains in the story. But it doesnt really affect how OP the MC is.
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