spoiler free review.
ngl i kinda ramble a bit
okay, I'm about halfway through at the time of writing this (113 chapters), so i think i can give a well-informed review. Im not a critic, so I'm not gonna write like one. I'll just put down my opinions. The concept alone is very original, and the initial world building is super solid. (If a little quick in the first chapter) The MC is relateble and understandable. he's also my favorite type of MC that isn't really the HERO type but only looks out for himself and those close to him but also isn't heartless. (also known as the Bai Zemin build) his specific overpowered gimmick is also not over the top, and he uses it well for the ost of the time. had a moment in the 100s that seems a little questionable) ge can use any ultimate limitlessly but not EVERY ultimate. so, not as OP as it could be. there's lolis, that's always a plus. The MC wears a mask in the game, but we never get a description for the mask, and that's literally my biggest problem with the whole book. is it a surgical mask? a domino mask? a cowl? is it like an oni mask? or something closer to the anbu from Naruto? he got a helmet at somepoint how the heck is that gonna work. descriptors is another issue i have (aside from how pretty the girl are) we don't really get descriptions for people outside of when they are first introduced so its easy to forget what the characters are supposed to look like. and the same thing with skills but to a lesser extent. YOU WILL forget what some of them do. to not go out on a negative note, the MC also isn't the type to keep a low profile to avoid trouble and doesn't hide his name. definitely not the "mystery expert that no one knows about" type. such face slapping, much humiliation
Please Update Author. It's been 5 Months
As an action book lover I really like this book. This book is amazing. I really love the writing style of the book and how interesting the plot is.
Llevo solo unos pocos capitulos........
Pero es divertidisima
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good characters, background, Main Character, and story.
I like how the mc does whatever he likes, his coldness, his strength and his personality the most.
simply a well written book, love it.
Ngl I’m gay for this author my doors are open anytime please release moreeeee
is this the same novel as lord Zhang fei just with different names?
Writing Quality = Good
Stability Updare = Really Good
But as for the rest.. Bad...
Paragon of destruction = Paragon of average
First point, MC doesn't seem to be logical at all, he threw golden opportunity to train just because he want to find a shortcut (that doesnt exist) or can't handle the training.
Second point, MC does stupid logical decision even if the best answer/solution is slapped at his face, he goes full retard because of plot (?)
Third point, the MC is AVERAGE, he doesnt have any talent whatsoever; what he has is the forbidden real, that from what is shown is not even that 'legendary', an example of a (my imaginary) scale:
Common - Rare - Rare+ - Epic - Legendary
The forbidden realm is only at Rare, or at max between Rare and Rare+
But the worst point is that 'this advantage' that he has on the forbidden realm IS USELESS; he has a forbidden realm that is only mentioned at the start of the novel and during chapter 50 from what I understood, and nothing. We know nothing about the forbidden realm, what it is exactly, what type it is, NOTHING, he doesn even use it; and we are already 100+ chapters in.
The Synopsis lied. The Mc is the dumbest human imaginable and extremely hateable. The writing quality and world building are good and a story with a plot such as this are wasted on its unlikeable idiot charcters. The Mc especially.
Not an interesting story
A bit similar to monster musume
MC Hao Ren ( Hao = good, Ren = man/human) = goodman aka mr.nice guy
Well not sure what to say, i just want to post my review right now
There is no pacing at all in this novel. One minute we are in a scene, the next, it jumps 4 months later or a couple weeks later. It's just not good. Time jumps are all well and good if they are done right...this..this is not done right.
Which world is the book based on, Is it an alternate earth or the earth we in and how would Marcus generate income apart from his F1 team ?
cos he’ll need it.