How good is this book?? Well kets just say i read 5 chapters without realizing it! Its that good.The only downside or should I say things you have to get use to is the way the MC is written as idk if its 3rd person or something. But I had to get use to it. Overall great job !
It sounds conceptually unique in a weird but good way, and the story follows as such, and I enjoy every bit of that element.
Also, I have a question about "The Veil" factor in the story, where did you get the idea from? I remember something similar from a old show I used to watch, but I have a single memory of its name or what it was about.
When you have finished reading the first chapter (which is where the story begins), you will be left wondering what took place because the story is rather original, the writing is excellent, there are no errors, and the plot is really intriguing.
I love how the main character (MC) was designed to have a one-of-a-kind personality with a pinch of craziness.
I am excited to read the rest of this story.
This is the worst MTL garbage I've seen on the site. The original story is OK. But the translation is hot garbage. I've seen authors with bad English here writing their own novels. It's not exactly fun to read but I can appreciate they are trying. This is blatant laziness. It's so lazy characters can have their names swapped. Males can be referred to as she over and over. Or the same name is literally used as every characters' name for some reason.
The story is still not failing to amaze me.....the progress of the plot can only be described using one word: perfect. Long TAO is rather calculative and plan well. Let's see what happens next.
Awaiting the next chapter.
I ate a bag of Doritos while writing this. N b.
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This novel is... Questionable? But I think the theme of the novel fits on how deranged the mc and how I take this... world? Okay, its pretty good itself except for some questionable parts. It’s good
Stability and World Building 3* since it's new. Ultimate cultivator trying to reach peak, dies instead, then reincarnates into his young self in another timeline. Uses his own cultivation technique from his past life in this new one, which is way better by the way, and surpasses everyone in cultivation. For those who likes a-hole MC's because they are OP and looks down on everyone, then this is your jam. But this novel does it better than any others out there. Imagine, you're someone who practices an elite martial art and time travels to cave man days, guess who's gonna win? This MC doesn't give two fux about anyone, except for dad of course, and just destroys and kills, like Terminator on steroids. And that's it...dude slays. The reason I gave it low stars? I'm not into these kinds of MC'S but for those who do, you might like this one. Verdict: 50/50, depends on your taste.
Another cliche arrogant mc ...
Some op guy from the past, who lost his common sense, seems to get off at hating on "inferior" things/ppl, and bc of the author he will be correct.
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The first realistic book. I love the plot. The description is too lit. Writer gimme half of ur writing power.
My eyes were swelling I had to keep my mobile off.But novel hook me from the start.
A must read novel worth reading.
Hey you,yes you aspirant reader. Grab your popcorn nd enjoy story.