BeyondTheLaw9y
As the first reviewer it's my responsibility to tell all of you that it is a "SYSTEM" NOVEL!!!!!!*coughs proudly in front of mere mortals who will never get a system in their life**Bows*
Its a good concept, but its too simple. It has none of the expected complicated political structure in the palace. Characters are all quite flat, and the world is mostly unexplained. At least they told us the cultivations levels.
The only thing I want to say here is that the translation quality leaves a lot to be desired. Not only that, chapters are released out of order.
Typical story where everyone hates the MC for no reason at all lmao. Just the usual trash, so don't get your hopes up. 140140140140140140140140
Great novel so far! Very satisfying story with decent character building. I’m hopeful for the future of this novel and hope you keep it up when you can. Truly a diamond in the rough with a lot of potential.Fighting!
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
How did a novel like this get on Webnovel? Like for real, this novels original plot was literally full of nationalism and racism to America, the general gist of the plot is that "America feels the mc is too smart, and because the mc is super nationalistic he refuses americas invitation so "evil america" attempts to sabatoge the mc but oh no the mc won't be defeated so he magically comes up with good technology instantly defeating america.
finally a good trench novel i can't wait for more
The story is great, but I am hoping that it would be more clear after revising it. I can't wait for the ML to appear though. I though have concerns on how a chapter could sometime contains a short update
Actually, the book cover made me click on it :D But I've read 3 chapters and I have to say I'm enjoying it. The beginning was quite different than others I've read and also great. Keep it up ;)
A história é muito boa,mas um pouco irritante a facilidade que ele tem em ganhar poderes,tornando ele bom em tudo,o que é bem entediante,mas .......bem..ela continua sendo boa,acho q é por causa da personalidade do izuku...........itttttokhghkjgfjjhdfghy
I'm not going to pretend that i'm good at writing reviews, but here i go. I like the story so far, the MC shows some real growth and isn't all about justice. Instead he is very self-centered and willing to do anything to protect his loved ones. He'll torture people for information or just because he wants revenge. And although he is pretty damn strong, he isn't overwhelmingly strong. It's a nice change of pace from the OP hero MCs. The world in general is well build. The magic isnt very special but it's well written and thought out. This novel is the reason why I bought SS for the first time. All in all a very enjoyable read.
