This story is a hidden gem .I really like it .The cat is cute .Want to own a cat now hehe . Wish both the cat and its caretaker a good adventure . Keep it up and update more !
It's like the author is 10 and has never got a Christmas present so he processed his sad live with this story where he gets everything for free. The characters are bad the story has 2 sides good and bad but nothing between. The Mc is like a child himself and I can say for sure that when I was 20 I was not like him. The dialogs needs improvement. I can understand that the author wants to create something that we haven't read a 100 times but to say hey I want it here you have it for free is not the best way in my opinion. After a month he is the strongest person on the continent, well I can life with that but than improve the background story and the plot
It's a good novel you get a good laugh once in a while and a descent plot but just like the previous work of the author its a semi parody of the cultivation world around the mc so don't take the novel seriously because most of the time things just fall on the mc lap by some coincidence or something he did that no one had ever done before and make a joke out of it. It is a type of novel that you read then forget, then come back just to dropped it again because the plot is too stagnant and the world just Favor the MC
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Unnatural feeling? So, is there going to be ******? If there is any, I hope the human DNA would get strengthened or their progenies would be weak and sickly.He shouldn't just prepare his boy, but also his knowledge. Many expert in their fields would die after the start of the apocalypse, knowledge needed to survive long term.
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@instagram Nathanisontheway4I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come!Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Chen rui straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself . I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality.For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :)As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping.I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)
I like it so much...the author is the best i give it 5 star the characters are so amazing and you can stop reading it so what are you waiting for read it now
Nice idea but aren t the chapter too short but good keep up more updates ?????????????????????????????????????????????
nice ?????? please give more important to Akiol and give akiol some power up and fights soon.please please please continue the wonderful story.
I've read the translated raws, although currently there's only 129, it's pretty good!
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