Let me start with a brief synopsis since the one at the top is... bad. Our main character, Qi Ming, wakes up in the body of a servant-disciple who is on the verge of getting kicked out of a powerful righteous sect. Because of that, the original owner of the body decided to become a spy for some demonic sect in exchange for pills that would increase his cultivation and let him stay in the sect. Then, enter MC, and the story goes from there with him trying to cut ties with the bad guys and climb his way up the power structure of the sect by using his golden finger to quickly increase his cultivation.That out of the way, here's my review:The first fifty chapters or so are... alright. The set-up I just described to you is fairly good and there is a decent amount of tension keeping the reader engaged as Qi Ming tries to navigate the sticky situation his predecessor left behind (he has to escape from the demonic sect people his predecessor was contacting, survive when they inevitably come and try to kill him, and also prepare for the sect assessment that will decide if he will be expelled or not). But once those initial threats are resolved the story takes a turn for the worse. MC stands out during the sect assessment, takes a powerful elder as his master, and finally gets assigned his cave abode.And, honestly, this is the point where the story kind of ends? You see, after this there's nothing but a series of timeskips where we get a list of all the cool items, powers, spells, and cultivation levels MC has been accumulating while "afk". Like, literally, it will say "...and then 4 years passed and MC obtained the blah blah blah..." and that will be the chapter.Honestly, I feel like the author sort of missed the point of an "afk system". In my mind, such a system would free the main character up to do things and go on adventures or whatever, but in this book the main character mainly just sits in his cave and lets time pass as he slowly gets stronger. And, honestly, when the main character just sits in a cave for years or decades on end to get stronger... isn't that just called cultivation? Why even have the conceit of an "afk system" if the MC is just going to do what every other cultivator has to do to get stronger?So basically, the book follows the format of: The MC spends a long time in his cave cultivating, he becomes very strong, he goes out to do one or two things (usually because the sect orders him to), he settles his tasks overbearingly with his OP main character powers, and then he goes back to cultivate some more. At first it's a few years at a time, but later we are skipping over decades, then centuries, with a few words.The author also keeps retconning and changing how the system works and how much MC needs to put in to keep it running. At the start it supposedly works like this: MC puts in some amount of spirit stones and his cultivation will increase at a rate of 10x normal without him doing anything, he can put in more spirit stones and increase the ratio up to a maximum amount. At the same time, he can simultaneously let a "game avatar" run a dungeon that the system generates which will drop items, cultivation techniques, and spirit stones. In the beginning, the dungeon runs aren't very profitable spirit stone-wise, enough to let him keep entering the dungeons and do a bit of cultivation, but not much more than that. Thanks to that, a big plot point in the early chapters in MCs struggle to get enough spirit stones to fund all the cultivation he wants to do, starting from begging his rich master and betting with his rich senior sister, and then moving on to him selling the items he gets from the system in his sect's market place, and then on to him using the system to master alchemy so he can create pills to sell at the market to steadily fund his cultivation (p.s. there author wrote zero scenes at the market, this all gets handled off-screen by one of MCs spirit pets). However, as MCs levels keep going up and the cost of running his system got higher and higher, the author finally realized that MC constantly selling hundreds of thousands or even millions or billions (in later chapters) of spirit stones worth of goods every single day at the local market is kind of unsustainable, so the "dungeon runs" started dropping enough spirit stones to fully fund his cultivation and also have a bunch left over, removing then need for MC to gather any resources and allowing him to fully rely on the system for everything.In short, this is a bog standard OP MC cultivation novel but with like 90% of the "struggling to power up" scenes omitted, leaving only the scenes where the invincible MC wanders around trampling his foes. Also, the author does that annoying this where whenever the MC is doing something impressive a dozen randos will pop out of nowhere and be like "Oh my god, is MC really trying to do that?" "That's impossible!" "No one could ever succeed!
Good work author. The book is quit detailing and religious and good timing. But I was just getting into the book...like I typed, good story line. I loved that she did not just bagged the job thing very real life-y. Tumbs up author.
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Please pick this book. Now on to the important review. It's nice.That's it.Were you expecting more of a fleshy review????Well too bad I suck at reviewing things ????
Just had started reading this novel on GT, didn't think it would be on webnovel so soon. Synopsis:- MC saves an old man who gives him a pair of extraordinary contact lens which changes his life from being a gangster type to extraordinary kind-of person and also MC used to be intelligent type but due him being poor and seeming to getting near a oujo Sama type girl her parents and teachers try to get them separate resulting in MC becoming gangster type. Now he has a harem but only do flirting with them also keeps a long distance between him and his harem i.e. a stupid MC. Story is going forward in a weird way but it is still okay to read but there is high possibility that you would start getting bored.
I like how Gravity Tales gave us 757 chapters without spending any thing to read them and on webnovel you have to spend 10+ spirit stones to read 1 chapter after that. Probably going to have to wait until next year for the chapters to get up to there to be open for free.
I'm so disapointed with the romance tag. I came here looking for some medieval novel after finishing spicy "I will now take your throne, dear father." and had to drop it after chapter 23. Any suggestions for a medieval (king/knight not eastern) novel with romance? Something with better pacing than this?
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I REALLY enjoy the premise of this novel. An Ai human hybrid with basically no emotions attempts to complete his last programmed mission which is to save earth and return human civilization. After a 100 years of rebuilding a wormhole opens to a new and magical word filled with life. What I like is how the MC pursues his goals, the whole conflicting nature of returning humanity to its former glory by murdering most in the new world and brainwashing the survivors into believing in his utopian goal. Give the book a try if you like the idea of skynet going against magical gods, monsters and all kinds of their fanatic worshipers.
there is too much fake review, let me give you the real review it's a really boring novel, I tried to read it till 140 chapters, I even started to skip but it's too trash to read. by the way I read mtl of martial God space to 1800 chapter and that crappy google translation entertained me more than this novel. the MC is too fake, his speed talent and assasin path which where unique were lost as chapters progressed. he was gone for creating spaceship and speed racing, robot making in like first 150 chaptersI voted for this novel because of authors other novel, if you want to read a space adventure go and read galactic dark net it's a good one
I've just started reading your novel (c18) and I think it has an amazing potential!I like how the beginning was unexpected, and the fact that the author doesn't give that much information about the story only just enough you don't get lost. He also adds these little teasers about the background of the main character that makes you think "wonder how that happened
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