Bad grammar structure making the story hard to follow. But if you push through that horrible mess it’s a decent novel but it could always be better much better.
It's very good compared to the other novels of this genre. It's a shame it's dropped...................................................................
To be honest never liked this one...it was really weird....mc was not my kinda character....and the story line was also weird....Always been into plagiarized mc s who will be rich with future knowledge ......This was kinda hard to read because of mcs constant mood change and depressions....This author as always been like this ......Emotions of mc are really scattered around like Lancet strello I remember ...it weird kinda ...but got along the way
Great story. It had dragged me along for a fantastic journey which I can’t forget and now that I’ve finished I’m left craving for more! Please update soon!
And so I have read this story, I guess Its time for a review. Well the synopsis is interesting. The first two chapters are well written and keagan and Fred's dialogues are humorous. #pizzathiefThe Mc is not like those who lose all hope in life after getting a bad news. He lives his life to the fullest... As a criminal!All in a all, I'll give the author a five stars. #justchill
Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.
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I'm just gonna keep this simple. Dweia, the author, knows what she/he is doing. The other book on here written by her/him, 'A Remnant of The Ancients' hooks you as fast as this one. The end of each chapter has you craving for answers and thirsting for more. The spelling and grammar is flawless, and the character building is superb! Make sure you definitely give this book and the author a chance, I promise you won't miss out!
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It seems to be one of the Xin Feng's worst novel from what I read until Lin Fang annoyed me so much that I dropped.This Lin Fang is basically trying to be like TSS's Lin Fan and the MC of 'Spare me, Great Lord' but just can't and take the worst of each of them making this abomination
Crap translation quality. Generic story. Lack of character development. Poor story overall. Biggest problem is definitely the translation quality. Multiple grammatical and spelling errors.
The system idea is novel but mc becomes op too fast. There was no story development, no essence. Not for me. Ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg.