MC chino diciendo cosas de chino y sobre todo haciendo el ridículo
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It is a somewhat nice novel and the concept has an amazing potential if devloped correctly but, the writing make it a bit unpleasant to read. I recommend the author to learn grammar and please use the appropriate time for each sentance.
13/05/2018I’ve read up to chapter 7, and I have to say that I’m hooked! I have no problem reading though the story, not a lot of grammatical errors. The author spent time preparing the story like kneading the dough before baking it. I don’t mind waiting a bit for action, if that means the author would have time to really prepare and write a good action scene. So far the story is about the MC reincarnating into the world he created, but the things that he used to know are altered by AI system of the game. I’m going to wait and see how this story develops. I hope it will lean on the magic and spell-casting side, but I know there will be some sword play since the he will be the spellsword or something. Please don’t go the normal sword-master-with-some-magic route, the way you introduced the magic system seemed really good.In conclusion, the story is a good read. However, it’s still in its early stages, we will have to wait and see how it will develop.
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I don't usually like sect building novels due to some negatives that plague eastern fantasy novels in general such as insane plot armor.However, the author has done a splendid job and rid the book of cliches. It is a pretty amazing read. The only qualm I had was the word count which the author increased in later chapters.10/10 a good read. Would highly recommend.P.S: I love the world imagery too. Gives me that comfy feeling while reading.
I have finish this, and it's kind of interesting for me... Its about a world where isekai or other novel (xianxia type) merge inside one world and lots of arrogant sh1t you all recognized... This is so so in standard, but my standard kinda low.. So yeah, it's good..
Absolute trash.Waste of time.Why do people create this type of novel, when they know they were getting nowhere with this.First 15 chapters are way too cringe.
I got as far as chapter 11 I know it might be too few chapters before judging, but I doubt it.Three main issue1)Too simple2) Too convenient3)Too fast-paced.within 10 chapters, he reaches the 4th realm of cultivation for this world, finds a disciple, and kills all bandits who are at the 2nd realm of this worlds cultivation, helps a city lord from an invasion in which a demonic cultivator of the 3rd realm of cultivation helps said people invading and then while fishing stumble upon the strongest sect master in the country of which the mc than joins said sect all within 10 chapters, chapters are average in length.Chapter 11 is what killed it for me, I know the system was going to make it easy for the mc but this way too easy all he does is check in every day and it gives him random stuff.Good points-writing is alright some words and grammar here and there needs work but it's very readable.-characters are the strong point of this story the mc is actually fun to read, his little disciple is as well, and their interactions are fun. Even the talking system is cool I know most find them annoying and with good reason, but his system seems to be a cool bro and not a jerk.