Muy buena historia, el desarrollo del mismo es muy interesante y transmite muy bien lo que quiere expresar.,.,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Well written story about a complete moron. It was one of those MC's that I was hoping would just die from his own stupidity but he kept being saved by ever-present plot armor
I really like the book but it definitely could use a better story plot after the first 30 or so chapters. I also think the updating should be a lot more stable especially when you are doing online books. I mean it's been 10 months since it's been updated and to be perfectly honest with the current state of the book it's not worth it to spend coins on it until it gets updated with at least 50 more chapters at the minimum. Now, no I'm not hating on the author or the book but from a realistic standpoint it's not worth it
The author writing is superb overall. With the interchange of occasional humor combine with wordplay, it's a plesant read for me. World is full with potential of exploration and is contstantly inviting the reader to explore the interesting idea it had. A good read if you're looking for a ride humu.
20 ch in and no kingdom building has occurred. High quality writing but a misleading title. If you want a story with intrigue and a dark setting, then this is for you. If you want the challenges of governance, setting up a kingdom, leading armies, etc. I have no clue when it will start given the stories pacing.
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
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Not a very bad not a very good concept. Mc was a cannibal in his previous life and also a serial killer so it is logical to expect that he should be cold blooded and have a collected personality but in the starting ch he is anything but that. How he easily forgave his mother for burning him alive for a year tho for his sake but still she hurt u bruh how can u easliy say its ok. And the darkness thing is quite weird but may be explained in the upcoming ch. He loses his cool with the fl and acts like an idiot. And lastly the thing i hate the most the cultivation world . The world is based on western fantasy as there are dukes kings marquis etc but then wth is there cultivation and spiritual energy or whatever. I jst hate the cultivation tag coz the majority of them are trash and weird. The power stages are so weird and cringy and the heaven and earth words which are literally in every chinese novel is so annoying.
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Posting a small chunk of a chapter and then saying you can continue reading on his patreon(ch.23). The story hasn't even developed enough to justify a patreon even