I have follow the journey through MMORPG rebirth of the strongest grandmaster with this being the sequel I am very excited to see what is to come. Those that are new it would not hurt to read MMORPG rebirth of the strongest grandmaster but do know that our author is the best at keeping to his word on bonus chapters. I look forward to the exciting new adventure that lays ahead for Max
At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation. just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.
This is a pretty decent magical shop owner novel. The characters aren’t terrible and the setting is your usual cultivation world. My one complaint Is that the grammar can be painful to read in most of the chapters Ive read so far. Hopefully it improves.
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well-written novels, I am waiting for the development of a more complete story. because this story might produce a masterpiece. I hope this novel is not dropped and makes it possible to speed up the update schedule
Other then the author being busy with RL (totally understandable) and having somewhat of an inconsistent update and the multiple POVs that are sometimes not needed its fricking amazing! I've been really enjoying the cute and lightweight story of the MC so far and I honestly can't wait for future updates! So far so good author keep up the damn good work
A very good read, a bit confusing/unclear at times but i still would recommend it! Also one of the most original books on this website. Well done to the author for writing something of this standard.
This review may change in the future, who knows. I'm only 15 chapters in.
I'm not gonna lie: the story is good and interesting. I love a good Reincarnation story. The characters are mildly interesting. At least I'm not seeing the cliche of every single character hating the MC for no good reason. There are a few grammar hiccups, but the writing style is good.
Now, the author doesn't seem to have a firm grip on updating. I suspect we'll be getting either 2 to 3 chapters a week, which is okay.
The pacing is a bit off. Some moments are rushed and others take too long. Luckily, there are not many of those scenes in the book.
As I said before, the characters are mildly interesting and they don't all seem to hate the MC. What hate he does get is entirely his own fault because he's a snarky twit.
The MC lived a bad life before, but the author doesn't try to shove this down our throats. They give us a bit of information, namely when the MC us moaning about the bad choices he made. I hope I see some growth in the future.
I think I'll write another one as the story progresses, to see if it gets better.
This is by far one of if not the worst novel I’ve read... like ever. There’s 2 main points I want to bring to light as many if the readers probably already know.
My first point being that the MC is mental. Really not much to say he’s just not the brightest. The main character is supposed to be a top dog S rank adventurer with decades of experience, and there’s nothing to show for this, at least in the chapters I read. He’s supposed to be 45+ years of age but his demeanor is that of a pubescent child and his intelligence is far less.
My second point is that as far as I can see the author isn’t so much as lazy about the releases but lazy about grammar and translations. I don’t care that he’s Portuguese, there are many authors on the site that do a way better job at translating and having proper grammar than the author and they don’t even use latin based alphabets. This is no excuse. This goes down to the authors commitment. If he cared more he’d research more or he’d use other things to help him. But he doesn’t and it shows, again as far as I read anyway.
So **** this I’m dropping it.
No wonder it took the top quickly, This novel was superb! I will read it till the latest. Please release more chapters! It will become popular in the future if I will guess it. Could do few finishing touches on grammar but it was very impressive on my part. I am also not a native English speaker like you. Your reader here, love lots on your work ❤️ ? Congrats for an advanced winning!
It's got face slapping if you're into that. The Mc seems is a idiot who doesn't understand nuance and what his place in the world is, he is a mortal vs cultivators and he antagonize them for a bet because obviously they don't believe a mortal can repair a immortal sword (basic flying sword). the bet is his life for breaking said sword and if he wins the humiliation of the cultivator, like what? he is basically homeless with only the workshop. so instead of money to pay off the debts his parents incurred after thier death he wants something vain for his ego. he was literally useless before the system, living like a rich young master with the income of his cultivator parents.