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Huge fan here........
Hello everyone, author here. I'd just like to say thank you for all the support. Honestly, the story just went from having a few readers to getting much more. I know full well that I may not be the idle author - some may like how I write and some may dislike it.
At the end of the day, it's your choice. I love writing too much to be bothered by that sort of thing. Honestly, it would not surprise me if majority of the readers get annoyed. I don't want to write something common and predictable. I want to write and love to write things that are harmonious and chaotic at the same time - that what I hope for at least. As I've said before, I'm unorthodox and a bit nuts in the head.[Sorry about that] ;p
Only thing I want is constructive criticism, things that will make me better and hopefully the story as-well. Or just post about the things that you didn't like/ obvious errors and such. I read every comment you guys post, go ahead and flame me for that matter, I'll filter out the good from the bad and hopefully make something even better for you guys instead.
P.S: I've gone back and slowly begun rewriting the previous chapters; bear with me and hopefully one day, we can all laugh about this
journey. (Shout out to the people who were here from the beginning, I love you all and promise to become better.)
Good novel, but the grammar, structure, writing quality, etc, leaves a lot to be desired. Frequent spelling errors, incorrect or poor word choice, among other problems leaves me with no choice but to rate it as I did. the novel is above average for webnovel but thats not exactly a high bar.
I started reading this actually expecting to be disapointed. But I have so far been surprised at how interesting the author made it. Having played League is probably a required to understand alot of parts. The in game matches takes a bit to long. And didnt like a chapter with to much bro- siscon romance for my taste.
very good logan liked it all i hope there is more coming do you know if there is another book coming ? looking forwards to the new chapters
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Helps companions and family? LoL he can't even help himself and still saying he will help others??
Excellent beginning - interesting worldbuilding, immediate ten.sio.n, a race against time! A VR game used to invade other countries. Do I hear echoes of Ender's Game? I'd like to hear how a VR game invasion managed to make it into RL.
The MC is racing to get strong enough to beat an invasion of VR players on his country. But then, things get more complicated, and matters appear that are greater than the fate of a single country or a single person.
This novel has layered mysteries, and the MC traveling back in time to participate in a VR game that destroyed countries is just the beginning. I read the brain journey thing and went ah, is this going to be like Knowhere? Unfortunately it wasn't and I stopped reading. I wrote this review instead, haha!
As for the MC, Ibrahim is the determined sort of person. He's definitely the kind hero type, not a trash MC. There's not a lot of character development at first; it is the plot that keeps the story moving forward in the first several volumes.
Minor problems in formatting - capitalization and punctuation mostly. Could be ignored, and it gets better, but there's a lot in the beginning.
Still, I definitely recommend this novel. Great read!
So far it's kinda funny in the way the Main Character acts. Excited to see where it leads. The wording is a little off but keep up the good work!
I just love this story, kkeut
This has completely exceeded my expectations.
Such a good novel, I binge read all 60 chapters at once.
Great world setting and great story. I don't know what else I should say, one of the most unique novels I've ever read.
Im giving it a five star because every cahpter is entertaining for me and the story is not on the cliche side of start
But im very confuse in their emotional state
Author tend to contradict of what their saying and thingking to what theyre doing(you know the the i hate you but love you at the same time and the most important person in my life but not as a family and the most powerfull person then there is another that also the most powerful man in the world)
I might chage the rating in the future though
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