The premise was pretty interesting. The story was definitely enough to get me hooked and wanting more. However, the writing was simply atrocious. I have no idea if it's a translation issue or the author is ESL and is still learning English. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Or perhaps even some kind of writing assistant to check for grammar and spelling.
The story is quite good. The grammar of course could be better,but still,it's ok. Though,I would have preferred you you used real players, and not made up ones. Overall,it's nice.
Great cover page! Nicely written synopsis, which gives an idea of what to expect from the content. So far the story is interesting, you skillfully take the reader into an unknown, different world.
Well done!
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I totally love it. The story is freaking interesting. I have only read up to chapter 35 now, but the way the story goes on gains my interest. I'm curious to know more about Leon and whether he will manage to find a cure for his disorder or not. I'll read more chapters soon. Yet again, thanks a lot for providing such marvellous content, Man. I truly love it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sorry, about this but I feel like I have seen that image before, used in the cover. Dragon Raja uses it for a character called Anjou who can stop time. I think it is necessary to bring some attention to this, stealing art for monetary gain is wrong. I will remove this poor review once I have recieved a response from the Author or someone who knows if the image is under fair use. The story idea does seem cool though.
pls pay attention to this one too romeru this one's good
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Its quite a unique novel ☺️
I liked it very much pls continue translation of this novel.
If you like dual cultivation novels then look no further and give this a try. Writing quality is fine (I didn't find any mistakes with my meager ability) and the plot even though some what generic is interesting. Unfortunately I found the story too early and now I have to wait for more chapters!!!!!
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Beautiful. You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential