I havent read much just about 5-7 chapters, but some parts doesnt make sense.
1st in the story he chooses ranger, but he has a blade slash ability instead of something bow related.
2nd the story says that rangers have high damage and high speed, but he only got two points in agility when he leveled up twice and he was getting 5 stats for his vitality which Rangers are suppose to be weak in. So unless he can assign stat points, this is pretty weird to say the least. Another reason could be that one point of agility weighs more than one point in vitality.(Like the bonus is more significant)
Great job. Your story is going on interesting. Please update daily. Good luck.Need more chapters. Overall awesome thought process. All the best.
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oh my god, I can't wait for another chapter it's so interesting it was like hunger games first but later. I'm speechless great job author it was amazing
Hey there. I really like your book and want to witness you becoming a successful author. I'm not much of a great author but I think I can call myself a low level author. Well then, please follow some of my tips and you might reach your goal. First of all, you should increase the updating stability of your novel. Please upload at least two to three chapters per week. You can also decrease the word count for a single chapter. I would recommend you to create a chapter which contains almost 1000-1900 words ,not more than that. You should also improve your Grammar. You should download some apps like gramarly which would definitely help you. After creating a chapter, before uploading it, you should read it completely for once and correct any grammatical mistake or punctuation error. Now that's for all, I really like the concept of your novel. I would love to read more chapters. ;)
Is this a lin Fan novels
The writing is better than the first part which says that author(Haji?) is performing well by putting all his scenes in a beautiful and lovely way.Excited for another part of his story.You all must read it.... Deserves good ratings ❤️
What you will find in this novel, dear reader? A story of a soul that stayed for a long time in the darkness and is transmigrated to another world with a simple job: protect someone. Maybe the fate of the world will be decided if he suceeeds or not.
I’ll give it 5 stars. The story is good the slice of life is wholesome- you kinda got out of hand when you start writing about the thug life but more or less great stuff. I have a headache sometimes though since the pov change out so much sometimes
Just curious, can the translators keep up with all the picked novels? The quality will go down if this keeps up.........................................................................................................
Really want to read. Please send a link to raws. PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease
Good.