Putting aside that the 'Dragon Vein Emperor Art' is used on meridians and not the 'rubbish' dragon veins, this is still a novel that I like.
I was already going to be disappointed when the first chapter referenced a cliche 'forced marriage' which I assumed would end up with a brain dead fiancee who dumps the MC but I was wrong. Xiao Yuran is sassy and actually kinda cute in how she is determined to marry Su Han. Definitely a different vibe than I, and really the MC, was expecting.
But don't worry, there is still cliche setups, like the backstabbing, brain-dead family members. I don't get this over-used plot element. However, in response the MC is certainly not shy in quickly dealing with any antagonist issue.
Furthermore, I like how he didn't d*ck around and just quickly chose his aforementioned art (instead of pretending to go through his massive memory library) and quickly got to leveling up. This kind of decisiveness shows itself over and over and it's something I appreciate.
Of course his awkward helplessness in dealing with his precocious fiancee is a nice counterpoint.
The score on this book so far is dismal, so it's clear that there are more popular genres that people want, but I don't really care and I'll put my vote for this book to be chosen.
Started out strong and then dropped off like a continental shelf.
Essentially a simping novel where the MC gets treated like shit the entire time. This might be a good novel for those of you with inner masochistic tendencies.
Pacing is horrible, translator cant even get the genders right (shitty as usual), and MC is unappealing.
Trash novel. ‘Nuff said.
Hurm, how to say this without offending the army of anti-bad reviewer?...
First, the synopsis kind of wrong? He said he found it, but from my humble opinion, he make it appear.. And then, the ChuGe guy has a weird sense of value to equipment... Everything seems like a trash for him. And don't forget that he has the weird personalities. Maybe because he learn it from the bad guy? He get a pet dog, four to be exact and use it for aggro... I know it's fiction, but this kind of tick me off...
just this book cover is enough for 5 stars.
it's a masterpiece that no mortal human can fathom and should be appreciated. Leornado De Vinci who's that? Author-sama is the real artist.
Okay so... With the two tags being #Reincarnation and #System, you can pretty much guess half of the story w/o actually reading it. But I digress...
With 35 chapters up while I’m writing this review, I can honestly say it’s all the same cliche that you’ve read over and over in other novels of the same type. But that’s why we read it, don’t we?
Nothing to write home about as of yet, but things at this stage are usually subject to change, be it for worse or better.
If you’re looking for something different... Tough luck.
Oh and by the way, I don’t have anything against the author YET. But it reeks of inexperience, I’d recommend cutting down the amount of chapters per week to increase the quality and then after it grows, increase the chapter amount.
But it’s all just my own opinion. So take it with a grain of salt.
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A novel with more than 200 chaps for free is being sold for money?
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This novel had only a few chapters when I'm giving this review. But I tell y'all that this novel is good. It started with a sense of mystery then it continued with a typical reincarnation story. Yet the author made sure that he makes the Story interesting. Kudos Author. Just Keep Writing.
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The story is pretty awesome and interesting up till know...
I like how the protagonist is "very" strong in the beginning and has comparing material to one of the top beings on the "planet". I also like how the story is different from the "real" Harry Potter and gives a complete knew view of things and aspects.
It is easy to read and most importantly: fun to read.
I read the original so the hopes are quite hight. The story was easy to follow, but if one didn't read Harry Potter, some points might be not so easy to understand or they have just forgotten. Therefore I suggest that you, take over the author way by adding explanations.
My biggest hope and wish is that you would write the story to the end and keep it interesting.
This is a good novel .
Why 1 stars ?1) The translator use quasi for everything it's annoying ....2) Nothing is explained the author think that everyone know everything about this "perfect world" novels3) The translator or author use terms like blood, eyes, brain for a plant ...4) The system is a sign in system 5) The system make the mc learn everything he get instantly6) The mc is stupid7) a lot of others things ....