Love their story. Just a little bit curious, what happen to Yichen? He is a sweet boy.
amazing story love the protagonist and its morals tho its a little bit hard to keep up whit the story love the evolution and wuould like to see what is next good work
Action scenes are quite good and well written, character interactions are good too and the plot is quite mysterious. Those not used to anime style will find it a little difficult to adapt but I'm glad I ain't a part of them lol. Overall a good work and recommended read.
keep updating author. waiting for more chapters
Im currently about 80 chapters in and it feels like the writing quality has gone down a bit after each chapter.
Writing quality - 2 -Pretty lackluster, overall "its in english" but the wording could be chosen better to create a smoother sentance. At multiple points the sentences will jar to a stop or end up be missing key words to make it flow right.
Story Development - 3 -it doesnt seem like theres much of a plan at all, except "protect family. kill enemy." and whatever story is there feels patched together.
Character Design - 2 -Not much to say there, typical OP MC that really is too dumb for his own good and is OP just to be OP.
updating stability - 2 - none listed / week. granted there was a new update ~14hrs before posting this. Maybe it'll look up from here.
World background- Legit feels like a ripoff of solo levelling meets latna: survival of a sword king.
Overall i wouldnt say avoid this, but veteran readers be warned: this is a bit rough. Maybe it'll improve in the future, and if it does ill come back and edit this.
Why was did chosen/picked?????
Do people really use coins for this??
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This novel is amazingly detailed and while there some cons to it, the novel is detailed and the MC is reasonably characterized. I feel that this novel should be selected as it is a refreshing twist on a original topic and I would to see where it would go. Not that I really like this novel.
Since this book is from Holyjoker. I will give it a 5 stars because the other of his work that I have read. Like Naruto: dream to immortality was good. I am sure he would have improved more on this work. So read and enjoy guys. I'm sure his dark theme style of writing will not disappoint those of your villaneous heart.
Respect✌️
My favorite novel ------
Cultural Invasion into Isekai
My Senior Brother is Too Steady
Mages Are Too OP
I Am the God of Games
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its a story about a villager coming to a town and finding beautiful girls and describing them in again and again to waste words and chapters.
Well written, coherent plot and pretty unique characters. Some very minor over-explanations along with MC being consistently overpowered. Well worth the read.
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