This is a very high-class and sophisticated novel
Which requires extreme IQ and knowledge of political events around the world to truly appreciate!
The World building is Top Class,
If there is no 3th wall breaking by the author whatsoever. Power level seems balanced and the fights so far are very exciting ;)
oh and it has foreshadowing so it must be good
please do not pay attention to the useless comments of some people, continue with the releases as usual and thank you...................!!!!!!!
More chapter pls!!
good luck
A pathetic excuse of an attempt of a beta MC who can work as fulltime si*sy. till chapter 11 there wasn't even 1 character who didn't made fun of him 1 way o another. Really do not waste your time.
This story has really good story line and I love the idea about a farming dungeon. I have been waiting a long time for a new chapter is this book done or just on hiatus?
if read it before loving it to if you gonna doing it please don't stop half way and finish it I like to listen it while working so please less ....... or______ that really distracting
All I can say is good job on you start as a new writer. My only critique was to improve and learn sentence structure and as well as edit typos. But all in all, a very good read and amazing work. Keep it up! The novel has potential and write more as the readers awaits more chaps [img=recommend]
This is pretty good so far. There are a few things that should be fixed like; you don’t need to write out ALL the stats some is fine, the interactions between people do not seem natural and the characters have not really been described so it’s hard to picture what they look like. The characters should really be described better, I usually see some sort of movie in my head of what is going on but in this book that doesn’t really happen.
The novel deserves nothing absolutely nothing I would give it a 1 star but some of the writing was good but I don’t understand is the MC Tomas or Charles? Also is MC a Female or male also this novel is a Walmart version of the name ju jutsu kaisin
I would dub this a good read for anyone interested in a cultivation based book.
It has good world building and an interesting main character. It's a well developed story and although I noticed a few grammatical errors here and there, this was still a good read regardless.
Kudos to the Author.
Its a pretty good book its a lot like The bloodline system, however the MC isn't instantly over powered and doesn't revolve around space and space travel. This story has a nice pace to it is written well. The people around MC are not just empty NPCs they feel like people as well which isn't that easy. Anyway keep up the good work look forward to reading more.
You are doing great with the story.... nothing much to say . Just that it feels like mc s not so powerful and I think you should start giving him powers . ...... PLEASE DON'T DROP (as many people with good interesting plot leave the story hanging.)
l don't know how many years it will take but l will wait for the story to arrive when he is 17 years old or 18 years old or when he debut his career professionally. after that l will binge read all that