I read the synopsis and I got really excited about the class changes and stuff because they don’t usually appear in other book. THEN i saw the author’s name. Welp, time to spend all my resources on this. Remember to rate the chapters people.
I'm caught up with the Translations. I am hooked! Despite the rough beginning, it does get better. Keep in mind this doesn't feel like a Xianxia at all.
The Sect more of an organization. Everyone like one big happy family.
I can't say much but for now it's been a delight.
[I see foreshadowing hints of the FL but I could be wrong since not enough chapters. Perhaps the FL has a bigger role then we all think??]
This definitely needs to be picked up as soon as possible. Or at least needs to be on the top 5 of votes for now.
This is the sequel to Exodus: The Assassin's Path. If you didn't read TAP, then you absolutely be lost. GnG is set twenty years after TAP and features QJ as the MC. He is the son of the MC from the first story. Many of the old characters are featured in the new story. QJ relies on his high powered intellect to figure things out. It's still early and lacks the 'wow' moments that made TAP such a great read, but I have high hopes that GnG will deliver.
Overall nice novel!
Writing Quality: 3/5. You should keep the consistency of your paragrafs more or less the same. I noticed that some times your paragrafs are soooo long. Try to keep them smaller for better reading. And try to separate dialogs from normal text so that thay are not so connected( sometimes it's hard to read because of that)
Updates: 5/5. ;)
Story: 5/5. The best part in my opinion.
Character: 4/5. Very good but You should take some time with Your characters. It feels a bit rushed.
World: 5/5. Excellent in my opinion.
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Girl: *sacrifices her self and ushers in a new era of peace*
God: “DO YOU WANT A DICK?!”
I truly believe that I can survive on mount Tai if I had wifi and electronics, my hands will keep me warm when i vist those websites If you know what i mean...
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