I really enjoyed the story, but the story development ist too fast for me . And sometimes I think the Mc get's thinks to easily.
But I like that the system doesn't dominate the Story , it's something different from other ''System'' like Story's .
an amazing read in my opinion. would recommend for translation in this order:
My Disciples Are All Villains
My Senior Brother is Too Steady
What It's Like Being a Vampire or The Greatest Secret Agent of All Time
It is a good ending to a great storyline. Wish there more. I enjoy reading the regular story and cpuldnt wait for the next chapters, with that said.. it is good to see the king to get is toon back.
The story plot is quite amazing and fascinating. You can feel something the moment you start reading it. The background is well described. Good work! Keep it up!
I loved it! This book was such a journey. Its story and ending brought me hope, it's relatable and sweet. It keeps your curiosity peaked in both the science part of the discovery and the subtle romantic tension that grows throughout the book.
You'd rarely find such a great novel these days, I recommend.
Really nice novel I love everything about it the way its written the plot the main and side characters. They're not just copy pasted like most novels I've seen lately where authors just take a character from another novel and change one or two things about it.
I needed to read a wish fulfillment novel to take a bad taste from a previous novel that I just read. I didn't expect a decent plot and some comedy as well...this novel only has a few chapters but so far I'm enjoying it.
uff, I don't know about this one guys. The premise of the story is refreshing, "vlogger goes to another world", but it just has so many problems.
In the first tens of chapters, Universe-wide reaching stuff is being foreshadowed.
MC gets super broken stuff very fast without any work at all (Items without grind, Killing intent without fighting more than 2 times) and characters super like mc after having met him once.
Now I know that luck is a thing but this one just piles on and on.
It kinda feels like that every good thing that can happen to an MC like:
-luck, face slapping, having a random girl from school like him, new OP Girl randomly likes him, S Class ability for free, Legendary item for free, System for free, Killing intent for free...
happens to this one.
The Vlogging part also becomes basically a side part of the story 50 chapters in I fell.
Writing
Now, this much is not that much of a problem as the others, considering that the author is a non-native speaker, but anyways there are grammatical errors that will make you pause all over the novel.
Man sorry for the rant, just had such a good premise...
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Great story, but one thing bothers me a lot. That is, the main character's kokugan. Don't you think 20 x speed is a bit too much? I mean there is literally no genkai that can ever hope to match it if MC can just blitz everything when he gets strong enough. Please nerf it, or add some backlash. I mean MC just goes 30 times faster than his original speed and just drains his chakra. If MC is as fast as Naruto in Boruto, then he can easily one shot every opponent so far. Just feels extremely unrealistic for a bloodline to be this op. Not to mention, if someone had the bloodline before him, then how is it still unknown?
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开局获得不死天功 Finally found this one 300+ chaptersno clue how it is