it's nice to see a fellow Indian write a novel. Although the English is kinda poor at some points, it's understandable so I don't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.
Very good novel. It has some rough spots with grammar and words, but is overall an amazing story. Jack is realistic and feels like a real person. The world around him also feels real, mainly because of how oddly gray it is with morals. I hope to see more.
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First the cover pic!
Then synopsis!
And then the story!
Amazing plot!!
nicely written!!!!!!
keeping going author! don't drop it in between!!
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Great quality of writing. very accurate and technically proficient. Graphic violent combat that gets the blood pumping fast! story is ok, but the characters are a bit flat. hopefully that will improve as the series continues!
the translator was snickering, not only was the translation in the last chapters much worse, they also began to divide one chapter into 4, and the release schedule is the same. I don't mind if the translator translates less, but let it be in the usual way, without deceiving readers
Flora est la fille de Norman, le champion de l'arène de Clémenti-Ville, et la grande sœur de Max. Elle remplace Ondine durant les saisons 6, 7, 8 et 9 et elle est la première héroïne coordinatrice du groupe de Sacha.Elle a une chanson thématique intitulée « I will not be Defeated! » qui montre bien sa personnalité par rapport au dessin animé.
I'm surely going to recommend this book to those who come here to see the reviews. Let me tell you, the book is just start but it's need your help and in my opinion the book would get millions views!! Great work by Author! keep going !
Didn't expect this when I read the title. Great job on the book so far though. I think this book will grow a lot the more you publish chapters. 100% loved it!
I actually liked this story very much until the sect got destroyed and MC ensured them he will make the sect rise again. Taking revenge is ok but why should he rebuild the sect when no people of the sect is alive. It makes no sense. Also the character development of the other people is not that much. Stability of updating is super.
If you had no problem with the problems I said, I am saying this is an absolute gem to read. You must definitely read this book.
This is a pretty awesome story to be honest there is not a lot to it yet but it is growing pretty good and leaves me hungry for more. Author keep it up and I’m definitely a fan from now on