Naonoe
The story seems good, i like the main character, underdog story it seems, Higher ups are pains in the butts, relateable. Good grammar. The plot is moving along at a nice flow. Cant wait to see more of the world. Update stability is tbd
I'm liking the novel so far. Hopefully there will be more chapters ?.Also I hope the mc doesn't get a human form, it's so overdone. Hopefully he just stays a snake.Also I'm not really a fan when the monsters end up evolving into more than what their species are. Say a snake turning into a dragon or growing wings.If flight is an issue just use air magic lolol
Wow....??I literally love this book, it's amazing pls update soon❣️❣️❣️❣️???Pretty please.....................................?????
Wow how unique I've never seen anything like this before. It's so unique that I can barely think of 20 other reads that seem similar. I'm sure there are a lot of hidden gems that aren't translated why keep repeating same copy and paste.
1 million special!!!!First of all, thank you everyone for your continuous support. In recognition of that, I've released 3 chapters today.Next, I'm glad you're looking at this (yes, you, the reader.) I'll try my best to entertain you through my writing.And lastly, some answers. This is a dark fantasy so there will be plenty of blood and death. There will be romance but not a harem. The plot is favored over the length of the chapters, so some might be shorter than others but I generally try to keep the word count close to 1.5kLastly, thanks again for picking this up. If you have questions, feel free to comment.Hate me? You can even send me hate mails. Address is in the bio.
This work is yet another amazing novel of Awe's and it shows. This novel is as exciting and enticing as his other novels, maybe even more so.
The writing is fluid, easy to understand and extremely vivid, each scene or fight is very well defined and it's pace is not too fast, nor too slow.
The story development is arguably slow, but there is no moment in which you will be bored with just fillers.
The character design is good, the author perfectly describes the feeling and emotional state the MC goes through, making it easy to relate. As for the other characters, they are also well defined, each with it's own personality and motivations.
As for the world development and background, Awe didn't spent a lot of time on it, and it unfortunately shows, but to be frank the world building doesn't have to be excellent.
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Personal i think that the novel is going to far, when mc leaves his family to go in space, for me this novel starts to smell bad, why mc left his family, one stupid mc
It's boring. .
The MC was a coward but suddenly turns courageous, when facing the boar he was like I close my eyes and you can’t see me kinda scaredy-cat but suddenly becomes very bold. Also the MC is a slave of the system that has to listen to everything it says or he will get punished by decreasing mission time limit or taking away system points that is a slavery system not sect system.
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I really like the story but I wish they will hurry up and update it it's been out for a while and it hasn't been updated since chapter 40 I don't know how much longer it's going to be till they updated I hope it's going to be soon
