I like how Anthony is being tortured by his desires towards Alayna's body..it is kind of refreshing to get into a perspective of a man in-love. It's very interesting book.
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I am in absolute love, I just wish they could finally get their moment without being interrupted. I have to fill in the rest of the characters so ahshejsjajaganKdjdhdiwkamsjd
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this good so far ? ?. .
This novel is absolutely phenomenal!Each character has such intricate details, and the author does a really good job portraying their individual personalities! (And the “Pokémon-catching” of MC’s lovers honestly isn’t as cringingly quick as most novels, and it is somewhat sensible.)The backstory of the main character & his sister was pulled off really well, and the MC’s & Layla’s subsequent resulting personalities have legitimate justification.1. Amazing writing quality! Hardly any grammatical errors.2. Pretty good update stability! It’s pretty stable, I just wish there was more! ?3. The story development is AMAZING!!! It really develops well.4. Character design is perhaps one of the BEST aspects! I already mentioned a bit about this, but the way that the MC deals with emotions (not knowing what emotions are, or what he feels) is really well-done! And the character development of othe characters is great, too, but I won’t talk about it, lol.5. World background is alright. It’s a bit confusing about how a “purge” would even come about, and how the President could possibly sign something that turns the purge permanent forever, but I just put that under “alternate earth” logic! ?(Because, I mean, even the Constitution get an amendment ratified - such as the 21st amendment of the Constitution, which repealed the 18th amendment, the amendment that banned the sale/manufacture of alcohol - Prohibition was repealed!)Lol, anyway, that bit of legislative logic can be filed under “it’s just a story!” ?
idk what to say man, but it feels like it has been years since a book that I've genuinely liked has been translated on this site
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