this novel doesn't get me as hyped as their is no major action as yet but so far it has been a good read and i ask that you don't put yuri in this one please
My only problem is that, sometimes I forgot who is the mc here due to multiple pov. ???
Another mc who doesnt know how to abuse his system why go to academies to learn magic if he can just loot it and if he goes to the academy he will just go offend someone right damn not giving mc brain just for the plot
Both book by the authors has a good premise, but have been so poorly executed you want to puke. It really is a shame for a good idea.
MC is retarded, but the world is much more retarded to highlight his amazingness.
Early is not so bad. As you usually cant expect much deep plot in webnovel.
But in ch. 30 ish.
He log into the game which require him to be unconscious in a possible enemy's car. For no fking urgency whatsoever. He went that far just to show how retarded he is to the reader.
dropped.
Translator did a good work though. But its better to pick another title.
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Perfect for the sister fetishes out there. Actually really great. I do worry though that it will be less focused on his sister and include more with other girls which I personally don’t want to see
great story with nice character development.Good detailed power level as well new character. new characters and a bit different from the MHA.
As interesting as this novel is, it's very hard to read. The characters are interesting, I love how feisty the mc is and the world seems interesting so far. I would be looking forward to reading more, but the writing is hard to understand. There's a lot of grammar issues and words that are substituted with other words. The premise is good and this has the potential to be an amazing top-notch story, but I suggest the author gets some help with proofreading.
Are we reading the same novel? The writing quality is so bad. The writer repeats sentences he’s already said and can’t properly describe the scenes. I’m not certain whether Author is just lazy or he’s a noob at this, probably overreaching himself and should had wrote something less complicated. Hey I get that most CN are ******* writings but...
Story is good but PLEASE no harem. I am starting to see harem built up. We need a MC who don’t need to take in females every time he meets them. We need balance with males. Also, please make the MC smarter. He seem to always help woman or he has no knowledge of how his power may bring benefits to his enemies or catch too much attention. Basically he has no control whatsoever on his power and doesn’t seem to think deeply on people he takes in. Almost like picking up trashes along the way and somehow they are women. No offense.
Hello writer! I loved his webnovel and would like to accompany Vlad in many other chapters. please if you are able to post more. I can't wait to see where this story can take us.
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