Zavia_6318
I’ve caught up to the most recent chapter and I’m really liked it so far. I’m also curious to the heights he can reach in the future, like can he destroy buildings? Are other people on earth able to even match him after he gets past the first stage of cultivation? Aliens? I like this story’s potential! Keep it up!
This seems like a solid novel. I like it very much, at least i like the first 40 chapters, i hope that webnovel will continue to poblish this novel!
Great novel so far, very well written, writer truly seems immersed in the love of his/her creation. Will be sinking power stones into it in the future. Would love to see this in the higher rankings! Namaste
So have been reading this up to v2 cap 3 and I have to say it's some very mature/dark novel until now, after every chapter you want to know how the MC is going to cope, with the latest sh$t he is thrown into.
I have some high hopes for this one ;)
This story has a great amount of plot-holes and a mc with brain problems.
To add to that the grammar is horrific and the author switches between perspectives(I/He).
I personally can not see why this story has a rating with over 4 stars.
Just going back and rereading/rewriting could improve the story imo, as the basic premise is quite decent.
THIS BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD BUT EHAT MAKES THIS BOOK GARBAGE IS THE ATTITUDE OF THE MCS BEAST!! HE LETS HIS BEAST DO WHATEVER THEY WANT AND THEY ALWAYS POUT WHEN THEY DONT GET THERE WAY AND HES LETTING ONE OF HIS BEAST BE A BULLY TO OTHER BEAST IN THE SECRET REALM!! THIS BOOK WAS DOING OK BUT AFTER THE LAST LIKE 5-10 CHAPTERS IT BECAME GARBAGE!! I HOPE PEOPLE DONT READ IT AND I HOPE IT GETS TAKEN DOWN!!! UNLESS THE ATTITUDE AND THE BEASTS CHANGE THEN ITS NOT WORTH READING AND ITS BASICALLY SAYING ITS OK TO BULLY THE WEAK AND ALL THAT AND THROUGH TEMPER TANTRUMS WHEN THEY DONT GET WHAT THEY WANT!!!
This is my first review..... good story line, not sure if it was terrible translation or terrible writing but it made it that much harder to read.
A great writing kept it up u litle talented .
U will be successful faster .And guys who are reading it please give him like and stone.
At least star give him he deserves it
It's an amazing book, even tho there' are flaws in writing, it is an amazing book. Every chapter makes me want to read it more and more! Keep up with the good work and I am the biggest fan!
it's super good. give it a try. plz don't quit author
It is written very gracefully. The start of the story is very awesome. I can't wait for the next part. These kind of stories must be published in books and newspapers.
I really like it! My only gripe is that the author mixes up entrée with appetizer all the time.
