Not good. Chapter 10 our mc has not got his power. Boring. I thought mc's brother is the real mc. I donot like this story. I donot know what you think about it. First beast is dinosour. In my opinion it should be low grade monster not dinosour. I drop this story. Boring story.
Marvellous story.... the plot is unique with the protagonist Kayden being a hybrid of two races I didn't think i would ever see.The story flows smoothly, the characters are intriguing and the world building as well as English and Grammar paint a fantastical picture... Fantastic story author, you have my vote!
The blatant power stone botting and lack of any sort of originality with this story is appalling. Its the standard copy-paste cheap novel that often gets translated from Chinese authors. I honestly dont understand why webnovel allows this garbage to ruin their site's reputation.
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For me to give it a five star! It means I LOVE IT! I'm the worst of all picky readers and I know it so please, if you have been thinking of reading it then get down to business and if you have not been... common give it a try I swear you would not regret it...And It's the character development for me... such a wonderful story, I swear word can't even describe what I want to say
Well, the concept of the story is nice. Minor grammatical errors that can be fixed in a jiffy and other than that I feel some paragraphs were a bit long but I have the same problem but otherwise I think it's a well thought out concept
this is one of the best books i've read in all the e-book apps. the story is really well thought out to the point of how many slaves come to baymard and how to divide them in various sectors for efficiency and effectiveness. love this book. I'll make sure to read it till the end no matter how long it takes.also hats off to the author, you did extremely well with this book. hope to see many other books by you in the future??
This is wish-fulfilling novels catered to STREAMERS.
I have no idea how did it get such a high rating. It's pretty much average all-around..
Well... this novel has reached the levels of cringe I never thought possible.
The story is very inconsistent or the translation is just bad so it misses the subtility/meaning in the original words. Honestly thinking about it I'm pretty sure the translation is just bad. Though the story is no better.
Grammar is ok... readable.
The plot is fk-in cringe... especially when the MC mixed some fruit juice and called it wine... and reading the titles he proceeded to sell a bottle for millions. Bruh... the author could have gotten so much better with the MC being a cooking prodigy and some other nonsense that is at least a little bit more believable and just more plausible and more interesting.
But no... the author had to go full BS on this one.
Story so far has been really good, looking forward to when it's fully released. More chapters pls More chapters pls More chapters pls More chapters pls
Banana
I want to like this novel because it has similar premise to legendary mechanic. But wow the writing is just terrible. Pacing is horrible, first plot point hasn't been completed at chapter 40 yet a bunch of other nonsense has happened, and the girl has gone from weak villager to Reaping the lives of elites from the city. Story is just so disjointed its not fun to read