trob_ballin
Very good. I hope it gets picked up because it’s a great story so far. Definitely worth reading and above the quality of most of the site. Give it a try!
If you wait or have always wanted to see a dark and serious Harry welcome you will like the story, a great fanfic that makes sense and has space for much history and mainly evolution of characters mainly in Harry.
One of my best readers in a long time.
I hope that the author never drops this novel.
Hail hydra.
Up to chapter i read its good but dude pls name the chapters so it can make some people read it readily as not all people will try to read every novel in webnovel wish you dont discontinue and continue to write it wisely :)
Good start, like the direction and the background. Gives lots of plot room and not your typical story. Not an idiot MC and a system of sorts that actually helps. Looking forward to more
I really liked the author notes continuing side by side with novel. I'm interested in finding more about what happens further in story . Right from first chapter I am hooked in story. I was already taking side of aichi vs gao 100th match but turning point strucked hard. Waiting for more chapters by author...
another misunderstood mortal that seems immortal mmhm yeah this gonna be the new trend?..........................End.
Everything was going well until chapter three, what the **** did you need it for? boy is this one of the worst novels i've ever seen, seriously, the whole land has only chinese, and he still says it would destroy other countries? What the ****?
it's good book but the long explanation makes my brain hurt................................So,3 stars.................................................
The story so far is great. Much better then all “game” type of novels, but still using some of the cliches (which I personally dislike). Stability of updates is a bit lacking, but if you read it after a serious number is out that won’t be a problem. Quality can be increased a bit, but is much higher then the average. World is not yet completed but sound realistic and interesting, complex as well. Characters have their personalities and while a bit shallow in comparison to famous books are better then most light novels, where only MC get screen time. They can at least say ‘no’ to him.
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Very quick paced, draws you in with action. Sometimes the sentences are a little long, so make sure to take your time reading them. The characters are realistic and intriguing. Can't wait to read more!
