Reading the synopsis i instantly got hooked to the story. It is well written and will intrigue your curiosity. I really like the characteristics of each character as well. I hope this book will earn a lot in the futureee. Even though this has less than 5 chapters i can say that this story is realy good and is worth it to try. Hoping for more chapters!!!
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Another loli novel. I'm outta here.
A wonderful story so far! Although I have only begun and gotten to chapter 19, I am excited to read more!
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Although the grammar is sometimes a bit off, I like the story quite a lot!
I love the characters in this book amd how one of the character is not given a name yet!!! I like the slow but instant affecttion between the 2 leads, which kinda makes it a bit rushed but nonetheless very interesting!! I like the dynamics of the book and m looking forward to reading it!! Fighting, author!!!✊✊
just want to give it five stars as I really like it. and want others to read it.....................................................................
I am currently reading at chapter 37. So far so good. The world building are clear, each character have their own unique personality ( Theo are the best character so far, I highly enjoying any chapters with him on it ) and I like how the author already planned how many chapters there is.
So, here is solid 5* from me
Really love what the earlier chapters set up! Love the character design, love the world and love the whole overall lore! Interesting characters in Jack and Zick, and seeing a great story moving forward!
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I was so happy that a new detective novel is on this trial read but left with only disappointed while reading it . Have some doubt regarding the book with how the first chapter was , but still went onwards. But left hopeless.---------The system directly shows the entire crime scenes as mc approaches the site . ---A mc which having problems to keep his **** in his pants.------The completely flawed and broken crime management system.
Very interesting story, from the title I thought it was going to be like some of the other "Teaser" Novels that have been released these few weeks. The title made me expect it to be something that caused the MC to become very OP quickly but to my surprise while it does have that aspect it isn't so quick to make the character strong. This story seems like it has a lot of potential unlike others which break the story (by making the MC OP) so much that their is very little plot or story so that the book ends quickly. I hope this story gets picked and it continues down the route and doesn't stray off and become something cliché.
Let me say this it could have been better is the mc is gay just say. look at how the story started and him getting the memories made him for in love with is brother now that could have been interesting